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Band 5+: The maps below show recent archaeological findings at a historic site in 2004 and 2014. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image features two comparison maps titled "Historic site in 2004" and "Historic site in 2014", both containing a compass rose marked N, S, E, W in the lower-left corner and bordering the "Sea" along the eastern edge. In "Historic site in 2004", the western area features 3 trees; the northern area contains a mountain range and 2 buildings, each labeled "Ancient House"; and the southeastern region shows an "Ancient Temple". In "Historic site in 2014", the northwest contains an "Ancient Stadium"; north-center contains an "Ancient Toilet" marked with male and female figures; the northeast replaces the mountains with a cluster of 9 houses arranged in two rows of 4 plus 1 adjacent house, labeled twice as "Ancient House"; the southwest shows 2 trees; the south-central area adds an "Ancient Palace"; and the southeastern area retains the "Ancient Temple".

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The 2 maps below illustrate various changes historic site has undergone over an 11-year period from 2004 to 2014.

In general, it is clear that the original of the historic site has been developed and populated with many civilization and many new places.

In 2004, there were only a few house and a mountain in the northeast corner of the excavation map, but in 2014 the mountain had been replaced by the expansion of ancient house and torne. To the left of the ancient house, in 2004 the space only be surrounded by trees. With the human activities, the forest had been renovated to ancient toilet and stadium in the northwest corner. It also experience a dramatic transformation which is the appearance of ancient palace near the center. Regarding those changes, ancient temple behind the ancient house and the sea which located in the northeast bottom remain unaltered over the time.

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the changes at the historic site, mentioning key developments such as the replacement of the mountain with houses, the addition of the stadium, toilet, and palace, and the unchanged temple and sea. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the location of the sea is incorrectly described as 'northeast bottom' instead of the eastern edge, and the number of houses is not specified. Additionally, the report includes some irrelevant or unclear phrasing (e.g., 'populated with many civilization') and minor grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate descriptions of locations and quantities, and use clearer, more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and a body paragraph, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, 'To the left of the ancient house' is vague, and the shift from discussing the northeast to the northwest could be smoother. The overview is present but could be more comprehensive. To improve, use clear paragraphing (e.g., one paragraph for 2004, one for 2014, and a separate overview) and ensure each sentence logically connects to the next with appropriate linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'undergone', 'expansion', 'renovated'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices, such as 'populated with many civilization' (should be 'civilizations' or 'structures'), 'torne' (likely a typo for 'town' or 'houses'), and 'renovated' (which is not the best verb for changing land use). The range is limited, and some terms are repeated. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'constructed', 'demolished', 'converted', 'residential area') and ensure word forms are correct.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include: 'the original of the historic site has been developed' (incorrect noun form), 'there were only a few house' (subject-verb agreement and plural), 'the space only be surrounded' (incorrect verb form), 'It also experience' (subject-verb agreement), and 'the sea which located' (missing verb). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of tenses (past simple and past perfect), and sentence structure. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading can help.

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