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Band 4+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Winsbury Village between 1850 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two maps titled "Winsbury Village, 1850-1950", contrasting the village layout between "1850" and "1950". In the 1850 map, labeled features include "church" and "market square" at a central road junction, "Harwood House" to the east, "Spurlon Farm" to the northeast, and "River Arlon" running across the southern area, surrounded by wooded areas in the northwest, west, and south, along with a few scattered houses along the roads. In the 1950 map, labeled features include "Glassware factory" in the northwest, "Harwood Hotel" (occupying the former site of Harwood House), and "River Arlon" spanned by a bridge to the southeast. Additional developments in 1950 include an east-west railway line with a station near the central junction, new rows of residential houses replacing Spurlon Farm and line the roads to the south and northeast, while the church remains intact and the original trees and market square label are removed.

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The maps illustrate the information about the changes that have taken place in winsbury town in 1850 to 1950.

Overall, there has many prominent changes in winsbury village in 1850 to 1950. Which are many trees to replace by glassware factory . After that, the winsbury village main market square supersede by railway line.

In 1850, there many trees in all over the village but it replace by glassware factory in 1950. Meanwhile, the spurion farm change to housing society in 1950. After that, the center area of winsbury village Harwood house to replace by Harwood. The main part of winsbury village in market square replace by railway line in 1950, and some trees has change to community house. while the various tree near the river arlon to remove in 1950. In 1850, the bridge was constructed over the river arlon to improve access between the two sides of the river. At the last the tree around the market square in 1850 to replace the various house.

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village: 5

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trees: 3

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house: 3

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by describing some changes between 1850 and 1950, but it has several issues that affect clarity and accuracy. The overview is vague and contains grammatical errors (e.g., 'there has many prominent changes'). Key features are mentioned, but some are inaccurate (e.g., the bridge was not constructed in 1850; it appears in 1950) and the description is often unclear due to language errors. To improve, focus on clear organization, accurate reporting of main changes, and use of precise vocabulary and grammar. Ensure that comparisons are made where relevant and that the overview clearly summarizes the most significant trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction, an overall summary, and body paragraphs, but the progression of ideas is often difficult to follow. Cohesive devices are used inaccurately (e.g., 'After that', 'At the last'), and the overuse of 'replace' creates confusion. Paragraphing is present but not skilfully managed. To improve, focus on clear topic sentences, logical sequencing, and accurate referencing. Ensure each paragraph covers a distinct aspect of the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent errors in word choice and form (e.g., 'supersede' for 'superseded', 'housing society' for 'housing estate'). There is some attempt to use a range of words, but inaccuracies hinder communication. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to maps and changes, and use words accurately. Practice paraphrasing and using synonyms appropriately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity. Issues include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. For example, 'there has many prominent changes' should be 'there have been many prominent changes'. Sentences are often fragmented or run-on. To improve, review basic grammar rules, particularly tenses and agreement, and practice constructing clear, error-free sentences. Consider using a grammar checker and revising your work.

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