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Band 5+: The maps below show the development of Shelby Village between 1970 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows three maps of Shelby village for years 1970, 1990, and 2010 depicting fields, forests, paths, apartments, resorts, new housing, offices, and concrete roads. In 1970, the village includes 1 large field, 2 small fields, 1 section of forest with surrounding paths, and 5 houses. In 1990, changes include 2 additional houses, 4 apartments, 5 new houses, the forest section reduced, and new concrete roads. By 2010, further changes include 6 office buildings, increased number of houses, new housing marked in red, and a large blue area indicating the establishment of a resort replacing part of the forest area.

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The maps illustrate the recontruction of Shelby village from 1970 to 2010.Overall ,Shelby village was mostly cover by vast forest and large area of field with only few number of resort. Whereas after following few years proper roads ,offices and new housing were build while completly eliminating agriculture land and deforestation.In additional more resorts were constructed above the road .

In 1970, only few resort was there in shelby village surrounded with agriculture fields and vast forest in the eastern and northern regions with only small path connecting the different areas. By 1990 ,the village began to mordernize as appartment were developed in large field with few trees and more resort were constructed on northen-east with small change with road.

In 2010 ,the village underwent dramatic urbanization.The field was completed replaced by a large appartment ,new building and by some resort . Significantly , new concrete road were made connectivity across the entire village .On other hand vast forest were deforested only the few tress were left whereas northern east was completly occupied by resorts .

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village: 6

resort: 4

shelby: 3

forest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes in Shelby Village over the three time periods. It covers the key developments such as the reduction of fields and forest, the addition of housing, apartments, offices, and roads, and the establishment of resorts. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report mentions 'resorts' in 1970, but the visual description indicates there were only houses and fields then. It also omits the specific mention of office buildings in 2010, and the description of the resort replacing part of the forest is not clearly stated. The report could be improved by more accurately reflecting the data and ensuring all main features are included. Additionally, there are some grammatical and spelling errors (e.g., 'recontruction', 'mordernize', 'connectivity') that affect clarity. Overall, the response is relevant and covers the main trends, but with some lapses in accuracy and completeness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with separate paragraphs for each time period, but the flow is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The introduction and overview are present, but the overview lacks clarity and precision. Cohesive devices are used inconsistently, and some sentences are difficult to follow. To improve, focus on creating a logical progression of ideas within and between paragraphs, and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Use a range of cohesive devices accurately and avoid abrupt shifts in focus.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to maps and development (e.g., 'illustrate', 'urbanization', 'constructed', 'replaced'), but there are frequent errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'recontruction', 'cover by', 'few number of', 'mordernize', 'connectivity'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of words like 'resort' and 'field'. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing changes (e.g., 'expansion', 'conversion', 'encroachment') and ensure precise word choices. Practice using less common and more sophisticated terms accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('were build', 'were made'), incorrect verb forms ('cover' instead of 'covered', 'were deforested'), and missing articles ('a large field', 'the forest'). There are also issues with punctuation, such as missing spaces after commas and periods. The range of grammatical structures is limited, with a heavy reliance on simple sentences and some incorrect complex structures. To improve, review basic grammar rules, particularly verb tenses and agreement, and practice writing more varied sentence structures with accurate punctuation.

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