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Band 6+: The maps below show the village of Richardson Pike in 1995 and present day.

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The image compares two maps of Richardson Pike from 1995 and the present, highlighting various developments and changes. In 1995, the village had a fish market south of Seaview Road near the fishing port, with shops nearby. A hotel was located east of Seaview Road, with a forest park behind it. Housing was evident north of the road, and farmland lay further northeast. In the present day, the fish market has been replaced by a cafe, while the fishing port has transformed into a shipping port. New apartments have been established south of Seaview Road, and restaurants have taken the place of the previous shops. The hotel remains but is accompanied by a new parking lot. The forest park has been replaced by a golf course and tennis area, eliminating its previous location. Farmland has disappeared in favor of expanded housing development north of the road.

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the two maps illustrate the changes in a village of richardson pike that has been made before in 1995 and after the development.

overall, it is obvious that there was a dramatic change in the infrastructure of the town. while facilities such as golf,tennis, parking and shipping port has been constructed, sea and hotel area remained unchanged.

To begin with, houses are increased on either side of jasper street to the west of the village as well as a further street has been built from the housing towards western side of the town.In 1995, there used to be a farmland and a forest park to the east side of the area, which are demolished and replaced with golf and tennis club. Parking has been built to the north-east side of the village near hotel, whereas shops are substituted with restaurants to the north-west side of the service road.

Furthermore, not only apartments took place of fish market but a shipping port has also been established as a replacement of fishing port. Cafe, which is located to the south-east side of the town kept untouched.

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The report effectively addresses the task by describing the key changes between the two maps. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as the mention of 'Jasper Street' which is not in the task description, and the claim that the cafe remained unchanged, whereas the description indicates it replaced the fish market. The report could be improved by ensuring all details are accurate and by using more precise language to describe locations and transformations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow of information is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'before in 1995 and after the development'). The paragraphing is present but could be more skillfully managed to separate different types of changes more clearly. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of changes, such as residential versus commercial developments.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'dramatic change', 'replaced with', 'substituted with'). However, there are instances of repetition (e.g., 'side' used multiple times) and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'kept untouched' instead of 'remained unchanged'). To enhance lexical range, incorporate more varied synonyms and precise terms related to urban development, such as 'converted into', 'transformed', or 'established'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing capital letters ('richardson pike'), incorrect verb tenses ('has been made', 'houses are increased'), and missing articles ('a further street'). There are also run-on sentences and comma splices. To improve, focus on consistent use of past tense for describing changes, correct article usage, and proper punctuation to separate clauses. Practicing complex sentence structures with accurate grammar will also help.

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