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Band 4+: The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image has two labeled diagrams “Now: Industrial area” and “Future: Area for houses.” The current industrial area includes sections for Parking, Storage, Entrance and Reception, Factory, five Offices, and a Canteen, all located within boundaries defined by a main road on all sides. In the future residential area, there are designated sections for three 2-bedroom houses, one 3-bedroom house, one 4-bedroom house, communal gardens, apartments, parking garages, and a parking area, also surrounded by main roads on all sides.

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The map illustrate how Briston city has transformed in the future. Overall, the city has experienced extensive alternations, offering more public and residental facilities, Notably, the area has been more built-up and green because of new changes.

Today, there is a entrance and reception in the north area and that are near the main road. road is surrounded the city. Packing is in a north-west and storage is bottom of Packing. There are 6 Office in south positioned in the same area with canteen. A Factory in east side of city.

In the future, the area is due to experience significant alternations. Entrance and Reception are set to be cleared, and 3 of 2 bedroom houses, communal gardens are predicted to be built. A packing and a storage is planned to be converted into 3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom house. A factory is expected to be replaced with a parking area and apartments. 6 offices and canteen are anticipated to be demolish and for this area is scheduled to be build parking garage.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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packing: 3

bedroom: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by describing both the current industrial layout and the proposed residential changes. An overview is provided, which helps in understanding the general trend of transformation. However, there are several inaccuracies in the description of the spatial relationships and the specific transformations (for example, the report suggests parking and storage are converted into houses, which is a specific interpretation of the layout). To improve, ensure more precise use of prepositions of place and work on grammatical accuracy, particularly regarding subject-verb agreement and the use of articles. Additionally, try to group information more logically to improve the flow of the comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'In the future'), the transitions between sentences are abrupt. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words and ensuring that each sentence flows logically into the next. Organizing the description by grouping similar changes together would also enhance the clarity of the comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'alternations' instead of 'alterations', 'residental' instead of 'residential', 'Packing' instead of 'Parking'). There is also some repetitive use of basic words. To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise synonyms for 'change' (such as 'redevelopment', 'transformation', or 'conversion') and ensure that technical terms related to maps (such as 'situated', 'located', or 'positioned') are used accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The map illustrate', '6 offices... are anticipated to be demolish'), article usage ('a entrance'), and sentence structure ('road is surrounded the city'). Additionally, there is confusion with verb tenses when describing future plans. I recommend practicing basic sentence structures, focusing on the passive voice (which is essential for describing maps), and reviewing how to use prepositions of place correctly.

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