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Band 7+: The pie chart below shows the highest level of education achieved by people over age 21 in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two pie charts comparing the highest educational levels among people over age 21 in Country A and Country B. In Country A: no schooling 5%, primary school 20%, secondary school 40%, university 20%, vocational training 15%. In Country B: no schooling 5%, primary school 15%, secondary school 35%, university 25%, vocational training 20%.

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The pie charts compare the highest levels of education attained by people over the age of 21 in two countries.

Looking from an overall perspective, what stands out from the chart is that secondary school records the highest percentage in both countries. Another striking feature is the difference in university education between two countries.

Regarding the categories in which Country A surpassed Country B, secondary school and primary school accounted for larger shares in the former nation. Secondary education ranks first in Country A, at 45%, which is 10 percentage points higher than the 35% recorded in Country B. Primary school makes up 15% of total in Country A, whereas the figure for Country B is 5%.

Turning to the categories in which Country B is higher than or equal to Country A, country B has a much higher proportion of university-educated people, at 25%, compared with 5% in Country A. The percentage of unschooled individuals is 5% in both countries. Vocational/technical school shares the same figure, at exactly 30% in total.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

country: 10

school: 5

education: 3

secondary: 3

percentage: 3

which: 3

higher: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall comparison, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the percentage for secondary school in Country A is stated as 45% instead of 40%, and primary school in Country A is given as 15% instead of 20%. Additionally, the figure for Country B's primary school is incorrectly stated as 5% instead of 15%. The report also omits the vocational training percentages for each country, instead providing a combined total. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and include all categories with specific figures for each country. Focus on making precise comparisons and avoid introducing incorrect numbers.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear overall structure. The introduction and overview are effective, and the body paragraphs logically group the data by country comparisons. However, the final sentence about vocational/technical school is slightly confusing and could be clearer. Overall, the cohesion is strong, but there is a minor lapse in the clarity of the last point.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'attained', 'accounted for', 'surpassed', 'recorded'). However, there is some repetition and a few imprecise phrases, such as 'the former nation' and 'shares the same figure, at exactly 30% in total', which could be expressed more naturally. A wider range of sophisticated vocabulary and more precise phrasing would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate, with a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences and comparative forms. There are no significant errors, and punctuation is used correctly. The report demonstrates strong grammatical control, though a few minor improvements in sentence variety and clarity could be made.

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