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Band 7+: The pie chart below shows the the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2020

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The image consists of a pie chart representing industry sectors' contribution percentages to Turkey's economy in 2020. Healthcare and Education stands as the highest contributing sector at 17%, followed by Manufacturing; Trade, Utilities, and Transportation at 16%. Agriculture and Leisure and Hospitality both contribute 14% each. Construction accounts for 10%, Government services make up 9%, while Finance, Business, and Other services have the least contribution at 8%.

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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy across eight different groups in Turkey in 2020.

In general, it is noticeable that different trends were observed. While ‘healthcare & education’ and ‘trade, utilities & transportation’ recorded the highest percentages of industry sectors among all the given categories, the opposite was true for ‘finance, business & other’ and ‘government’.

In 2020, the highest percentages of industry sectors, ‘healthcare & education’ and ‘trade, utilities & transportation’ contribution to the economy of Turkey, stood at 17% and 16%. By contrast, the lowest figures of industry sectors, ‘finance, business & other’ and ‘government’ among the eight groups, accounted for 8% and 9%.

In Turkey, ‘leisure and hospitality’ and ‘agriculture’ showed the same figure for industry sectors, standing at 14% in 2020. ‘Manufacturing’ recorded 12% of the industry sector in Turkey, while construction reached figure 2% lower for the industry sector in 2020.

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industry: 7

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turkey: 4

sectors: 4

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing a clear overview and highlighting the key features of the pie chart. The comparison between the highest and lowest contributing sectors is well-executed, and the grouping of similar data points (such as Agriculture and Leisure/Hospitality) demonstrates good analytical skills. To improve, ensure that the mathematical relationships between all data points are consistently accurate; for instance, the final sentence mentions a 2% difference for construction, which aligns with the data, but the phrasing could be slightly more fluid to avoid repetition of the phrase 'industry sector'. Overall, it is a strong, well-structured response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices such as 'In general', 'While', 'By contrast', and 'In 2020' helps guide the reader through the comparisons. However, the overview is somewhat generic; instead of saying 'different trends were observed', it would be more effective to summarize the main feature (e.g., the dominance of service-oriented sectors versus others). Some transitions between sentences could be smoother to ensure the flow is effortless.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate for the task, using terms like 'illustrates', 'proportion', 'accounted for', and 'recorded'. There is an attempt to vary the language used to describe percentages. To reach a higher band, try to avoid repetitive phrasing such as 'industry sectors' or 'of the industry sector', which appears frequently. Using more sophisticated synonyms for 'showed' or 'stood at' (e.g., 'constituted', 'comprised', or 'represented') would enhance the lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses. Most sentences are error-free and convey meaning clearly. There are minor issues with phrasing and article usage (e.g., 'reached figure 2% lower' is awkward; 'reached a figure 2% lower' or 'was 2% lower' would be more natural). Ensuring consistent use of articles and refining the phrasing of comparative structures will improve overall grammatical precision.

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