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Band 5+: The pie chart below shows the worldwide distribution of private insurance policies. The table shows the private insurance policy ownership of three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows global private insurance policy distribution with Auto 35%, Health 31%, Life 28%, Other 6%, and policy ownership by country: India - Auto 0.4%, Health 3.5%, Life 1.7%, Total 7%; England - Auto 10%, Health 7.9%, Life 5.7%, Total 25%; Australia - Auto 1.9%, Health 1.3%, Life 0.5%, Total 15%.

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The pie chart illustrates the worldwide distribution of private insurance policies. The table depicts the private insurance policy ownership of India, England and Australia.

Overall ,the distribution of private insurance policies auto has the highest rate, in addition compared with the rate of other is lowest. England has the largest number of population than other countries India and Australia.

Firstly, the worldwide distribution of private insurance auto policies has the highest rate

at 35%, the rate of health is slightly lower at 31%. The rate of other categories are the lowest at 6%, life insurance is slightly higher at 26%.

Secondly, England has the largest population at 25%, the rate of population in Australia has slightly lower at 15%, India has the least rate of population at 7%. The number of auto accounts for to 10% in England, also to 1.9% in Australia and 0.4% in India. The rate of health stands at 3.5%, 7.9% and 1.3% in India, England and Australia. The rate of life have at 1.7% by India, also has at 5.7% by England and to 0.5% by Australia.

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india: 6

england: 6

insurance: 5

private: 4

population: 4

australia: 4

distribution: 3

policies: 3

other: 3

slightly: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, presenting some of the main features from both the pie chart and the table. However, there are instances of inaccuracies and a lack of clarity in the data representation. The organization is present but could be improved for better flow. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, making clearer comparisons, and ensuring a more logical structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between ideas. The 'overall' statement is vague and doesn't effectively summarize the data. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to group related information more logically. To improve coherence, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') to link sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some repetition of terms like 'rate' and 'population.' While the vocabulary is generally accurate, it lacks sophistication and precision. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to insurance and demographics. For example, instead of 'rate,' consider using 'percentage,' 'proportion,' or 'share.' Also, explore using more descriptive adjectives and adverbs to add detail and nuance to your descriptions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often simple and repetitive, limiting the overall impact of the writing. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and focus on correcting common errors. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures, including complex sentences, to add variety and sophistication to your writing. Pay close attention to prepositions and articles, as errors in these areas can significantly affect clarity.

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