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Band 6+: The pie charts below compare the percentages of users across different age groups on Twitter, Facebook, and YouTube. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains three pie charts displaying the percentage of users on Twitter, Facebook, and YouTube by age group. On Twitter, users aged 10-17 represent 14%, 18-34 account for 30%, 35-49 comprise 24%, 50-64 make up 22%, and those aged 65+ constitute 9%. For Facebook, users aged 10-17 are at 19%, 18-34 reach 32%, 35-49 stand at 25%, 50-64 equal 18%, and 65+ account for 6%. On YouTube, 10-17-year-olds make up 19%, 18-34-year-olds consist of 30%, 35-49-year-olds hold 26%, 50-64-year-olds form 16%, and those aged 65+ form 9%.

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The pie graphs illustrate the proportions of Facebook, Twitter, and YouTube users by five different age groups.

Overall, Facebook and Youtube users followed almost a similar pattern, while Twitter distributed quite differently. The greatest usage of social media can be observed among 18-34 and 50-64 years old people, whilst retiree accounted for the lowest figures across all applications.

Regarding Twitter, adults between 18 and 34 represented the largest share by a wide margin at 40%, whereas people above 65 constituted for the lowest figure at only 4%. More modest percent can be seen among adoloscents at 9%, followed by adults aged 35-49 at 29%.

Percentage of users on Facebook and Youtube, by people aged 10-17, 20-64, and 35-49 recorded almost the same proportions with only 1% difference, at 14-15%, 30-29%, and 19-20% respectively. Users of these same apps between 18 and 34 made up just over a quarter of the total, when individuals over than 65 accounted for only 8% and 10% respectively.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall comparison, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the percentages for Twitter are incorrect (e.g., 18-34 is stated as 40% instead of 30%, and 65+ as 4% instead of 9%). Additionally, the data for Facebook and YouTube are misrepresented (e.g., 10-17 is given as 14-15% instead of 19%, and 18-34 as 30-29% instead of 32% and 30%). The report also omits the 50-64 age group for Twitter and misstates the age ranges for Facebook and YouTube. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and clearly compared across all platforms.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas and avoid abrupt transitions. For instance, the second paragraph starts with 'Regarding Twitter' which is fine, but the third paragraph could be better connected to the previous one. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a clear main idea and that comparisons are made more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. Some word choices are informal or inaccurate, such as 'retiree' instead of 'those aged 65+' and 'adoloscents' (misspelling of 'adolescents'). There is also repetition of 'users' and 'percentage'. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more formal academic language, and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'constituted for' should be 'constituted', 'over than' should be 'over', and 'More modest percent' should be 'A more modest percentage'. Also, the sentence 'Percentage of users on Facebook and Youtube, by people aged 10-17, 20-64, and 35-49 recorded almost the same proportions' is confusing and contains incorrect age ranges. To improve, use a wider range of sentence structures and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.

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