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Band 5+: The pie charts below show units of electricity produced by fuel source in Denmark and Germany in 1978 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows four pie charts illustrating electricity units by fuel source, alongside a legend for Coal, Oil, Natural Gas, Hydro Power, and Nuclear Power. For Denmark in 1978, total production was 90 units, comprising Coal 53, Oil 15, Natural Gas 7, and Hydro Power 15. In 1998, Denmark's total production was 160 units, with Coal at 122, Oil at 2, Natural Gas at 2, and Hydro Power at 34. For Germany in 1978, total production was 80 units, sourced from Coal 22, Oil 20, Natural Gas 22, Hydro Power 5, and Nuclear Power 11. In 1998, Germany's total production was 160 units, with Coal at 20, Oil at 20, Natural Gas at 6, Hydro Power at 3, and Nuclear Power at 111.

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The pie charts shows how many units of electricity in Denmark and Germany. The years is 1978 and 1998.

Overall, Denmark and Germany both increaseelectricity. Denmark use coal many and Germany use nuclear power many in 1998.

In Denmark, the total units increase from 90 to 160. Coal increase a lot from 53 units to 122 units. It is the bigest. Hydro power also increase from 15 to 34. But oil and natural gas decrease and go down to 2 units. Denmark have no nuclear power in two years.

In Germany, the total units also increase from 80 to 160. In 1978, coal and natural gas and oil is about 20 units. But in 1998, nuclear power increase very fast to 111 units. It is the most. Coal and natural gas and hydro power all decrease. Oil is same, it is 20 units in 1978 and 1998.

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units: 9

denmark: 5

power: 5

increase: 5

germany: 4

nuclear: 3

natural: 3

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The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the pie charts and making some comparisons. However, the information presented contains some inaccuracies and lacks detail in certain areas. The organization is generally clear, but the language used is quite basic and repetitive. To improve, focus on providing more precise data, using a wider range of vocabulary, and varying sentence structures. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The 'overall' paragraph is too simplistic and doesn't effectively summarize the key trends. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to create a smoother narrative. For example, use transition words like 'similarly', 'in contrast', or 'furthermore' to connect ideas. Paragraphing is present but could be more strategically used to group related information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive ('increase', 'decrease', 'units', 'many'). There's a lack of precision in describing the changes and quantities. To improve, try using a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'rose significantly', 'declined sharply', 'remained stable'). Also, use more precise language to describe quantities (e.g., 'constituted the majority', 'accounted for a smaller proportion'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('shows' instead of 'show', 'increase' instead of 'increased'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Denmark use'), and awkward phrasing ('coal many', 'nuclear power many'). Sentence structure is also quite simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., complex sentences, passive voice) and carefully proofread for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage.

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