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Band 4+: The plans below show a college cafe before it was redesigned and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two café floor plans. The first, 'Café before redesign', contains a Kitchen, a Serving area for all food & drink, a section for Tables and chairs, Toilets, a Bin, and two Staff dining rooms, each with 1 round table and 5 chairs for a total of 10 chairs. The second plan, 'Café today', features a Kitchen, separate areas for Hot meals, Salad bar, Take away food, and a Coffee bar, a main Tables and chairs area, Toilets, and Recycling bins. This design adds a Barbecue and Outdoor seating area with 4 tables: one with 2 chairs, one with 4 chairs, and two with 6 chairs each, totaling 18 outdoor seats.

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The diagram depicts significant alterations to the layout of the college café. Overall, the college café has become more developed to provide new services with the introduction of a new salad bar, barbecue and outdoor seating was added. The serving area zone, table and chair, and recycle bin remained stable. Compared to its previous layout, the town is now significantly more developed.

A new salad bar area was constructed in the college café. An additional, barbecue was added in the new café. The new outdoor seating has been built on the area. Some services such as toilets, kitchen and table& chairs have never changed.

The former serving area (all food and drink) no longer exist in present area. The former staff dining room disappeared and substituted with coffee car.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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college: 3

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Task Response

The report successfully identifies the main changes between the two layouts, such as the addition of a salad bar, barbecue, and outdoor seating, and notes that some features like the kitchen and toilets remained unchanged. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as mentioning 'recycle bin remained stable' when it was only present in the new design, and referring to 'coffee car' instead of 'coffee bar'. The report could be improved by more accurately describing the changes to the serving area and staff dining rooms, and by making clearer comparisons between the two layouts. Additionally, avoid vague statements like 'the town is now significantly more developed' as the task is about a café, not a town. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the changes but lacks a clear overall structure. The message is not always easy to follow due to abrupt transitions and some unclear references (e.g., 'the town is now significantly more developed' seems out of place). Paragraphing is present but not skilfully managed; the second paragraph mixes new features with unchanged ones without clear logical grouping. To improve, organize the report into clear paragraphs: one for an overview of major changes, one for new features, and one for removed or unchanged elements. Use cohesive devices like 'while', 'whereas', and 'in contrast' to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and repetitive (e.g., 'added', 'new', 'developed'). There is some attempt at variation ('significant alterations', 'constructed', 'substituted'), but the range is narrow and not always natural (e.g., 'the town is now significantly more developed' is inappropriate for a café). To improve, use a wider range of precise terms related to layout and design, such as 'relocated', 'expanded', 'replaced', 'introduced', and 'designated'. Avoid informal or irrelevant phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include: 'outdoor seating was added' (should be 'was added' or 'has been added' for consistency), 'no longer exist' (subject-verb agreement: 'area' is singular, so 'exists'), and 'substituted with coffee car' (unclear and incorrect; likely means 'replaced by a coffee bar'). Punctuation is mostly correct but sentence structures are often simple or fragmented. To improve, practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences with accurate verb tenses (past simple for completed changes, present simple for current features). Proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors.

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