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Band 7+: The plans below whow a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the meain features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image presents two park layouts of Grange Park: one from 1920 and one from today. In 1920, along Arnold Avenue, the park featured two rose gardens flanking the entrance, with seats adjacent to each garden, a stage for music, a fountain, and a glasshouse. Eldon Street ran along the south side of the park where there was a pond for water plants. The current layout includes a single rose garden next to an amphitheater for concerts, a cafe, and a children's play area on Arnold Avenue. Eldon Street now features an additional entrance to the park, a water feature, and an underground car park. No numerical data points, percentages for sections, countries, categories, or years are visible in the image.

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The document represents a park when it opened in 1920 and the same space today, illustrating multiple changes in space distribution and decoration

The main differences between the park in the past and today are the removal of the central fountain replaced by Rose garden and the replacement of the stage for musicians by an amphitheatre for concerts.

The plans show that the renovated park has introduced a cafe, removing the need for five seating spaces in 1920 to four today, all placed around the central rose garden. We can also see that the pond for water plants at the righ top has been changed to a children’s play area, allowing the park to welcome lower ages. The glasshouse at the right bottom of the park when it first opened gave place to a water feature which can attract more people. Finally, the previous right top rose garden was removed and a cafe has been installed which is useful for individuals who would like to relax with a drink. Finally, the Grange Park has introducted an entrance for underground car park, making life easier for visitors who own a car.

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The report covers the main changes between the 1920 and current park layouts, including the replacement of the fountain with a rose garden, the stage with an amphitheater, the pond with a children's play area, and the glasshouse with a water feature. It also mentions the addition of a cafe and an underground car park entrance. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the location of the pond is described as 'right top' but it was on Eldon Street, and the cafe is said to replace the 'right top rose garden' while the visual description indicates the cafe is on Arnold Avenue. Additionally, the report does not mention the new entrance on Eldon Street. To improve, ensure accurate placement of features and include all key changes for a more complete summary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear introduction and a logical progression of ideas. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between the second and third paragraphs, and the repetition of 'Finally' which slightly disrupts the flow. The paragraphing could be improved by grouping related changes more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly appropriate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'renovated', 'installed', 'introduced'). However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'righ top' (should be 'right top') and 'gave place to' (should be 'was replaced by'). The range of vocabulary is not particularly wide, and some terms are repeated (e.g., 'finally').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of passive voice. However, there are several errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity, such as 'The document represents a park when it opened' (should be 'The plans show the park as it was when it opened'), 'the previous right top rose garden was removed and a cafe has been installed' (tense inconsistency), and 'has introducted' (should be 'has introduced'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons.

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