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Band 4+: The table and graph below give information on internet searches in the US between 2004 and 2010. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate

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The image includes a table and line graph showing US search engine data from 2004 to 2010; the table lists total searches as 4.5 billion in Nov 2004 and 16 billion in Sep 2010; the line graph reveals Google starting at approximately 35% in Nov 2004, rising steadily to about 65% by Sep 2010; Yahoo beginning at around 32%, declining under 20% by Sep 2010; Microsoft starting near 15%, dropping below 15%; AOL beneath 10% in Nov 2004, falling further below 5%; Ask Jeeves hovering around 5%, steadily declining under 3% by Sep 2010.

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The pie chart illustrate the percentages of people who used internet in the usa from 2004 to 2010.

It is clear that, google is used by the highest percentages of users. while , the lowest percentages of users used in ask jeeves.

In terms of ,In 1999 the proportion of people searching google on internet users in the US was about 35 percent. The figure for yahoo and Microsoft were lower at about 32 percent and 18 percent respectively. In 2007 the figure of google reached just over 50 percent , while Internet searches in the both yahoo and Microsoft decline around 28 percent and 15% of the users .

For the remaining of the period, in early 2005 AOL and Ak Jeeves eached searched just under 10% and continued to declined in the end of the period .The figure for yahoo and Microsoft showed fluctuated but at a time continued with a gradual decrease from 2004 to 2010. While google was highest searched list over the perion

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google: 4

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microsoft: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It misidentifies the visual as a pie chart instead of a table and line graph, and includes incorrect dates (e.g., 1999, 2007) and data points. The overview is present but lacks clarity and precision. To improve, ensure the correct visual type is identified, provide accurate data from the given information, and structure the report with a clear overview and well-organized paragraphs. Avoid irrelevant details and focus on the key trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information chronologically, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear references and abrupt transitions. The introduction misidentifies the visual as a pie chart, which confuses the reader from the start. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and logical progression, and the conclusion is incomplete. To improve, use clear paragraphing: one paragraph for the table (total searches) and one for the line graph (trends), with a clear overview. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'over the period') to link ideas smoothly, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent misuse of terms (e.g., 'percentages of people' instead of 'percentage of searches', 'eached' instead of 'reached'). There is some attempt to use appropriate language (e.g., 'proportion', 'decline', 'gradual decrease'), but it is not consistent. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'soared', 'plummeted', 'levelled off', 'peaked') and ensure correct word forms (e.g., 'declined' not 'decline'). Also, avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'in terms of' and 'the remaining of the period'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('The pie chart illustrate'), incorrect verb forms ('eached', 'decline'), and punctuation issues (e.g., 'while ,'). Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex constructions. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as relative clauses and conditional forms, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors, and use commas and periods correctly to enhance clarity.

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