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Band 6+: The table and line charts below compare international tourist arrivals and revenue for four East Asian countries from 2000 to 2014.

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The image contains a table titled 'International Tourist Arrivals (Millions)' and a line graph titled 'International tourism revenue in four East Asian countries (2000–2014)' measured in US$ billions. The table data for arrivals is as follows: in 2000, Thailand 9.6, South Korea 5.3, Singapore 7.7, Japan 4.8; in 2002, Thailand 10.8, South Korea 5.8, Singapore 8.2, Japan 5.2; in 2004, Thailand 12.0, South Korea 6.5, Singapore 8.9, Japan 6.1; in 2006, Thailand 14.1, South Korea 7.8, Singapore 9.7, Japan 7.3; in 2008, Thailand 15.9, South Korea 8.8, Singapore 10.5, Japan 8.4; in 2010, Thailand 19.2, South Korea 9.8, Singapore 11.6, Japan 8.6; in 2012, Thailand 22.4, South Korea 11.1, Singapore 13.1, Japan 10.4; and in 2014, Thailand 24.8, South Korea 14.2, Singapore 15.3, Japan 13.4. The line graph shows approximate tourism revenue in 2000 as: Thailand ~US$8B, Singapore ~US$8B, South Korea ~US$7B, and Japan ~US$5B. By 2014, the approximate revenues were: Thailand ~US$28B, Singapore ~US$17B, Japan ~US$15B, and South Korea ~US$14B.

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The table and line graph illustrate differene between the number of international tourists and money earned from tourism in four East Aian countries between 2000 and 2014.

Overall, all four countries experienced significant growth. Thailand recorded the highest number of tourist arrivals, and it also generated the highest tourism revenue. In contrast, Japan had the lowest figure at the beginning, but it increased considerably at the end.

According to the table, Thailand experienced a significant rise in international tourist arrivals, from 9.6 million in 2000 to 24.8 million by 2014, making it the leader among other countries. South Korea also experienced steady growth, increasing from 5.3 in 2000 to 14.2 by 2014. Similarly, Singapore saw a gradual increase, starting with 7.7 million and ending with 15.3. By comparison, Japan showed a slightly rise, moving from 4.8 to 13.4, however it remained the lowest number.

Turning to the graph, Thailand again saw the biggest increase, going up from around $8 billion to over $26 billion. The other three countries followed a similar upward trend. Singapore remained second, rising its earnings from approximately $7 billion to $17 billion. South Korea and Japan started at the bottom, but ended close together at about $15 billion and $16 billion by 2014.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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countries: 4

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japan: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and detailed comparisons of both tourist arrivals and revenue. The overall trend is clearly identified, and key data points are used appropriately. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions: the revenue figures for Singapore and South Korea in 2000 are slightly misstated, and the final revenue values for Japan and South Korea are reversed. Additionally, some data points (e.g., intermediate years) are not mentioned, but this does not detract significantly from the overall response. To improve, ensure all figures are accurately reported and consider including a few more specific data points from the table and graph to enhance completeness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for the table and graph. The use of cohesive devices such as 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' and 'By comparison' helps the reader follow the progression. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition in the last sentence of the second paragraph ('however it remained the lowest number') and the slightly awkward phrasing 'rising its earnings' which disrupts flow. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but smoother transitions and more precise referencing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'significant growth,' 'experienced a significant rise,' 'steady growth,' and 'upward trend.' However, there are some inaccuracies and limited sophistication in word choice. For example, 'differene' and 'East Aian' are misspellings, and 'slightly rise' should be 'slight rise.' Additionally, phrases like 'making it the leader among other countries' could be more concise and natural. To improve, aim for more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct spelling and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, with some accurate use of past tenses and comparisons. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For instance, 'differene' and 'East Aian' are misspelled, 'slightly rise' should be 'slight rise,' and 'rising its earnings' is incorrect (should be 'raising its earnings' or 'increasing its earnings'). Additionally, the sentence 'however it remained the lowest number' lacks a comma before 'however' and could be rephrased for better accuracy. To achieve a higher score, focus on proofreading for spelling and grammatical accuracy, and practice using a wider range of structures with precision.

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