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Band 5+: The table below gives information about the population of people aged 60 and over in six regions in 2000 and the predicted figures for 2050. It also shows the world total of people aged 60 and over in 2000 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a table with columns for Region, 2000, and 2050, showing percentage data. For the year 2000, the values are: Africa 5%, North America 11%, Europe 22%, Asia 12%, Latin America 7%, Oceania 11%, and Whole world 13%. For the year 2050, the values are: Africa 12%, North America 26%, Europe 31%, Asia 28%, Latin America 18%, Oceania 22%, and Whole world 24%.

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The table illustrates the information about population of people in age 60 over six regions in period 2000 and predicted figures in 2050.Also it shows the worlds total of people aged 60 in period 2000 and 2050.

Overall,Europe has the highest number of population in all period,whereas Africa has the lowest number just 5% in 2000 and 12% in 2050,when Europe already had 22% in 2000 and increased to 31% in 2050.Other regions was stable and had similar amount of people aged 60.But Latin America was the second lowest country after Africa. And had 7% in 2000 when Africa had 5% in same year.

On the other hand,all of six regions had pretty good numbers except Africa and Latin America.They rosed in 2050 when in 2000 already had a good number of people aged 60.

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The report addresses the task by presenting an overview and some key data, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it incorrectly states that Europe has the highest population in all periods (though it does have the highest in both years, the phrasing is imprecise), and it fails to mention the world total figures. The statement that 'all of six regions had pretty good numbers except Africa and Latin America' is vague and not fully supported by the data. To improve, ensure all main features are covered, including the world total, and provide more precise comparisons and data. Avoid informal language and ensure clarity in describing trends. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The second paragraph mixes the overview with specific details, and the final paragraph is vague and repetitive. To improve, organize the report into clear paragraphs: one for the introduction, one for the overall trend, and one or two for detailed comparisons. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link ideas smoothly, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with limited range. Words like 'good numbers' and 'rosed' are informal or incorrect. There is some attempt at comparison ('the second lowest', 'similar amount'), but the language lacks precision and sophistication. To improve, use a wider range of academic and precise vocabulary, such as 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'projected to rise', 'significant increase', and 'relatively stable'. Avoid informal expressions and ensure word choice is appropriate for a formal report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('the population of people in age 60'), incorrect verb forms ('was stable', 'rosed'), and run-on sentences. There is also inconsistent use of tenses. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and proper verb forms. Use a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, and proofread to eliminate basic errors. Punctuation, especially commas and full stops, needs attention to enhance readability.

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