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Band 5+: The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a table with five column headers: "Year", "Religion marriage", "Civil marriage", "The average age of bride", and "The average age of bridegroom". The data rows for each year are as follows: for 1960, Religion marriage is 25.000, Civil marriage is 8.000, The average age of bride is 21, and The average age of bridegroom is 24; for 1970, Religion marriage is 28.000, Civil marriage is 12.000, The average age of bride is 23, and The average age of bridegroom is 25; for 1980, Religion marriage is 50.000, Civil marriage is 16.000, The average age of bride is 25, and The average age of bridegroom is 27; for 1990, Religion marriage is 32.000, Civil marriage is 23.000, The average age of bride is 27, and The average age of bridegroom is 30; for 2000, Religion marriage is 34.000, Civil marriage is 40.000, The average age of bride is 30, and The average age of bridegroom is 32.

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The table illustrates the marriage age situation between 1960 and 2000 in Australia.

Overall, it is clear that while number of religion marriage fluctuated wildly the other groups increased sharply. In addition, in 2000 civil marriage climbed gradually and reached the highest score.

Firstly, only in 2000 the civil marriage number was higher than the religion marriage. Additionally, between 1960 and 2000 the average age of bridegroom was always higher than the average age of bride. The changes between the average age of bride and the average age of bridegroom was changed between 2 and 3.

Secondly, in 1960 the civil marriage reached 8.000 while in 2000 the number was 40.000. In 1990, the religion marriage was higher than civil marriage even though the average age of bridegroom bigger than the average age of brdige. In addition the smallest change between religion marriage and civil marriage was in 2000. The highest differences between religion marriage and civil marriage was in 1990.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

marriage: 12

between: 6

civil: 6

average: 6

religion: 5

number: 3

higher: 3

bridegroom: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by presenting an overview and some key features, but it contains inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the data for religion marriage is not accurately described (e.g., it fluctuates but peaks in 1980, not just 'fluctuated wildly'). The comparison between civil and religion marriage is partially covered, but the report misses the steady increase in civil marriage and the peak in religion marriage in 1980. The age data is mentioned but not fully developed. To improve, ensure all main trends are accurately reported and avoid vague statements. Focus on clear comparisons and precise data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'the other groups increased sharply' is vague, and the connection between sentences could be smoother. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. The overview could be more comprehensive, summarizing the main trends more clearly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some repetition and imprecise word choices. For instance, 'climbed gradually' and 'reached the highest score' are not the most accurate for describing data trends. Use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'increased steadily', 'peaked at', 'fluctuated'). Also, avoid informal expressions like 'bigger than' and ensure correct word forms (e.g., 'bride' instead of 'brdige'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'while number of religion marriage fluctuated wildly' should be 'while the number of religious marriages fluctuated wildly', and 'the changes ... was changed' should be 'the difference ... varied'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. The overall meaning is understandable, but accuracy needs improvement.

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