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Band 4+: The table below shows how young people in Tokyo, Japan, listened to music over the previous month. The pie chart shows a record company's international fundings about wheter people preferred live or recorded music.

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The image includes a table and pie chart analyzing music listening preferences. The table shows that 60% of males and 44% of females prefer live music; 79% of males and 40% of females use MP3-players; 55% of males and 42% of females use the Internet; and 19% of males and 22% of females listen to CDs. The pie chart indicates that 70% prefer recorded music, 26% prefer live music, and 4% don't know their preference.

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The table display outcomes company’s international fundings about whether people preferred live or recorded music in Tokyo.

Firstly we see that men prefer listen the live music, it can illustrate the 60% of all kind of music. In contrast it is in 16% more then famale. The other part of society like listing recorded music. From my point of view live music is really stunning and sensitive. The less useful it is a CDs.

So for the fair compare we need to apply on the all people and not separate them. According to the pie chart we can noticed that the huger part of the Tokyo prefer listings live music. It was chosen by 70%. The other part it is the recoverded music-26% and 4% don’t know their opinion.

In conclusion we see that the people have their views on that tips. A lot of people like mp3-players and don’t use CD’s. We can see that live music it is the important part of the culture and life.

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The organization is weak, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from both the table and the pie chart, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

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The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information from the table and pie chart are not effectively integrated or compared. Paragraphing is weak, and the connections between sentences and ideas are often unclear. To improve coherence, focus on organizing the information into distinct paragraphs, each addressing a specific aspect of the data. Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to link ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information. Avoid introducing personal opinions or irrelevant statements.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in article usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple and clear sentences, and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your proficiency increases. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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