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Band 5+: The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbishedd. The chart shows the results of survays asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods.

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The image contains a table and two pie charts. The table indicates the total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum: 74,000 before refurbishment and 92,000 after. The first pie chart, showing visitor satisfaction before refurbishment, conveys these percentages: Very dissatisfied 10%, Dissatisfied 40%, Satisfied 30%, Very satisfied 15%, and No response 5%. The second pie chart, demonstrating satisfaction after refurbishment, displays: Very dissatisfied 5%, Dissatisfied 10%, Satisfied 40%, Very satisfied 35%, and No response 10%.

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The table illustrates how many people visited Ashdown museum both before and after its refurbishment, while the pie two charts provide information about visitor’s feelings.

A quick glance at the chart reveals that both table and pie charts show a positive attitude. The number of visitors increased dramatically and also tourist’s satisfaction enhanced, declining visitor’s dissatisfaction, after refurbishment.

The total number of traveler was 74,000 before the Ashdown museum refurbishment, but when it was refurbished, the total number of visitors significantly rose by 18000 people. Due to refurbishment of the museum, the surveys show a positive satisfaction about visitors satisfaction.

While a significant number of visitors felt dissatisfied before the refurbishment, after its refurbishment, those dissatisfaction reduced significantly. Similarly, the feelings of dissatisfied individuals also declined. No response remained almost unchanged before and after refurbishment the museum. In contrast, the number of people who felt satisfied before refurbishment, after this, very dissatisfied individuals increased dramatically. Similarly, satisfied individuals also showd a significant rise.

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refurbishment: 7

before: 5

after: 5

number: 5

museum: 4

visitors: 4

people: 3

dissatisfied: 3

individuals: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by mentioning both the visitor numbers and the satisfaction levels. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency in the final paragraph. Specifically, the report claims that 'very dissatisfied individuals increased dramatically' after refurbishment, which directly contradicts the data provided in the visual description. Additionally, the overview is somewhat repetitive, and the description of the trends lacks precision. To improve, ensure that all comparisons of data are factually accurate according to the charts and focus on grouping similar trends together to create a more coherent comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by repetitive phrasing and confusing transitions. For instance, the final paragraph contains contradictory statements (mentioning both a decrease and an increase in dissatisfaction/satisfaction in a way that is difficult to follow). To improve, focus on using a wider variety of cohesive devices and ensure that each sentence logically flows into the next without contradicting the previous point.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive (e.g., frequent use of 'refurbishment' and 'dissatisfied'). There are also instances of incorrect word choices, such as 'the pie two charts' and 'the total number of traveler'. To reach a higher band, try to use more varied synonyms for 'visitors' (e.g., patrons, guests, tourists) and 'show' (e.g., depict, illustrate, present). Additionally, ensure that nouns and adjectives are used in their correct forms (e.g., 'those dissatisfaction' should be 'that dissatisfaction' or 'those dissatisfied visitors').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence attempts, but grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. Issues include subject-verb agreement ('satisfied individuals also showd'), incorrect article usage, and awkward phrasing ('positive satisfaction about visitors satisfaction'). Work on mastering tense consistency and the correct use of singular/plural nouns. Practicing the structure of comparative sentences will also help in describing the changes between the two periods more accurately.

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