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Band 4+: The table below shows the percentage of people in four different age groups participating in sports activities in 2010 and 2020.

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The image presents a table with columns for 'Age Group', '2010 (%)', and '2020 (%)'. For the '10–19' age group, the values are 75 for 2010 and 80 for 2020. For the '20–39' age group, the values are 60 for 2010 and 65 for 2020. For the '40–59' age group, the values are 45 for 2010 and 55 for 2020. For the '60 and above' age group, the values are 20 for 2010 and 35 for 2020.

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The table compares the percentage of different age groups participating in sports activities in 2010 and 2020.

The graph shows the 4 age groups in 2010 age group ranging from 10-19 years are 75% and this is the highest percentage of all the 4 groups. Age group 20-39 are 60% then 40-59 is 45% then 60 and above are 20%.

From 2020 highest age group is 10-19 and it is 80% and the least percentage group is 60 and above is 35%.In summary, while younger people continued to participate in sports more frequently than older adults, all age groups became more active over the decade, with the largest gains occurring among those aged 60 and above.

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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groups: 4

group: 4

percentage: 3

above: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task by identifying the main trends and providing data for all age groups in both years. The summary effectively highlights the overall increase in participation and the specific growth in the oldest demographic. To improve, ensure more cohesive transitions between the description of 2010 and 2020 data, and avoid repetitive phrasing such as 'age group' and 'percentage'. Additionally, ensure the terminology is consistent; the report refers to the table as a 'graph' in the second paragraph. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The transition between describing the 2010 data and the 2020 data is abrupt. To improve, use more sophisticated cohesive devices and linking words (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Regarding the year 2020,' or 'Looking at the data for...') to guide the reader through the comparisons. Additionally, avoid repetitive sentence structures that start with the subject followed by a simple verb.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There is a heavy reliance on simple phrasing like 'is 75%' or 'the highest percentage.' To reach a higher band, try to incorporate more varied academic vocabulary for describing trends and proportions, such as 'accounted for,' 'represented,' 'witnessed an increase,' or 'the most significant growth.' Avoid using 'the graph' when the task specifically provides a 'table'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical inaccuracies and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. For example, sentences like 'The graph shows the 4 age groups in 2010 age group ranging from...' are structurally unsound. There are issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence fragments. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures, such as using relative clauses (e.g., 'The 10-19 age group, which had the highest participation rate, stood at 75%...') to improve both range and accuracy.

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