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Band 7+: The table below shows the percentages of individuals under the age of 18 and over 60 in California, Utah, and Florida, as well as their average annual income and impoverished population.

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The table illustrates the percentages of citizens aged under 18 and over 60 while showing the average income and the rates of population living in poverty across three nations: California, Utah, and Florida.

Overall, Utah has the highest proportion for young individuals while Florida possesses the highest proportion for older individuals. In regard to the average income and the percentages of impoverished people, California ranked the highest.

In terms of adolescents, roughly one-third of the Utah population (28%) are under 18 while California and Florida showed quite percentages of 17% and 16%. Regarding the elderly people, the figure for Florida is at 23%, almost triple that of Utah (8%). Meanwhile, California ranks second regarding the percentages of elderly, at 13%.

Regarding the average income, California took the lead with 23,000 dollars, followed by Florida with 22,000 dollars, and Utah with 17,000 dollars, respectively. Additionally, the data for the poor witnessed a similar pattern, with California standing at 16%, and that of Utah and Florida reaching 9% and 12% accordingly.

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florida: 5

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The report effectively addresses the task by presenting the main features of the table, including the age distributions, average income, and poverty rates for the three states. The overall structure is clear, with a logical progression from an overview to specific details. The data is mostly accurate, and the comparisons are relevant. Minor omissions, such as not explicitly stating that the data is for states rather than nations, and slight imprecision in the phrase 'quite percentages,' do not detract significantly from the overall quality. To improve, ensure precise terminology and consider explicitly noting that the data pertains to states within the US.

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The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing and logical progression. The overall structure is effective, but there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'quite percentages' which is unclear and disrupts flow. Additionally, the final sentence could be more smoothly connected to the preceding information. To improve, ensure that all comparisons are clearly linked and that transitional phrases are used consistently.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'illustrates', 'possesses', 'ranked'). However, there are a few awkward or imprecise word choices, such as 'quite percentages' and 'the data for the poor witnessed a similar pattern'. To enhance lexical resource, use more precise and natural collocations, and avoid informal or vague expressions. For example, 'similar pattern' could be replaced with 'comparable trend' or 'mirrored the income data'.

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The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. However, there are a few errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity, such as 'showed quite percentages' (missing 'similar') and 'the data for the poor witnessed' (incorrect subject-verb agreement). Additionally, the use of 'respectively' is slightly misplaced. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement and ensure that all phrases are grammatically complete and natural.

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