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Band 6+: The table shows the two age groups participating in the marathon from 2008 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a table titled "The two age groups participating in the marathon from 2008 to 2012" with columns labeled "YEAR", "Age group 18-39", "Age group 40+", and "Total Participants". For 2008, the values are 1,200 (Age group 18-39), 800 (Age group 40+), and 2,000 (Total Participants). For 2009, the values are 1,350 (Age group 18-39), 850 (Age group 40+), and 2,200 (Total Participants). For 2010, the values are 1,500 (Age group 18-39), 900 (Age group 40+), and 2,400 (Total Participants). For 2011, the values are 1,600 (Age group 18-39), 950 (Age group 40+), and 2,550 (Total Participants). For 2012, the values are 1,750 (Age group 18-39), 1,050 (Age group 40+), and 2,800 (Total Participants).

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The picture illustrates two types of age group categories who took part in the marathon between 2008 and 2012. Overall, it can be seen that over the four years, people in 18-39 age group were 1.5 times more likely to participate in the marathon than those aged 40 and over, and also every year witnessed more participants than in every past year.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, the number of individuals who were in age group 18-39 increased consistently to 150 every year except for 2010 to 2011, because these years experienced a rise to 100. For example, the total number of individuals in the marathon increased gradually between 1,350 and 1,500. Nevertheless, next age group(40+) number changed to 50 every year until 2012. One example for that, there was rise between 800 and 850 from 2008 to 2009. However, during the period of 2011 to 2012, people in the 18-39 age group were 1,050, which was 100 more than in 2011 in 2012.

Moreover, the total number of participants increased gradually every year. Specifically, the marathon saw an annual growth of approximately 100-200 runners. Consequently, the overall figure rose significantly from 2,000 in 2008 to 2,800 by 2012.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

every: 5

group: 4

marathon: 4

number: 4

between: 3

18-39: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in the data, including the overall increase in participants and the higher numbers in the 18-39 age group. However, there are some inaccuracies and unclear statements. For instance, the claim that the 18-39 group was '1.5 times more likely' is not precisely supported by the data, and the description of annual increases contains errors (e.g., 'increased consistently to 150 every year except for 2010 to 2011' is inaccurate; the increase from 2010 to 2011 was 100, not 150, and the increase from 2011 to 2012 was 150). Additionally, the sentence 'people in the 18-39 age group were 1,050' is incorrect; 1,050 refers to the 40+ group in 2012. The report also includes some awkward phrasing and grammatical issues. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the specific figures and trends, and ensure clarity in describing changes year by year.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'these years experienced a rise to 100' and 'which was 100 more than in 2011 in 2012'). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some sentences are not logically connected. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, use a range of linking words and referencing to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'witnessed', 'increased consistently', 'annual growth'), but there are instances of imprecise word choice and repetition (e.g., 'next age group(40+) number changed to 50 every year' is unclear). The range of vocabulary is adequate but not wide, and some phrases are informal or inaccurate (e.g., '1.5 times more likely' is acceptable, but 'the picture illustrates' is not ideal for a table). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and avoid informal expressions. Also, ensure that terms like 'rise' and 'increase' are used accurately with appropriate collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'people in 18-39 age group were 1.5 times more likely to participate' is missing an article, and 'there was rise between 800 and 850' is missing an article. Also, the sentence 'which was 100 more than in 2011 in 2012' is confusing. Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or lack proper connectors. To improve, focus on using articles correctly, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and constructing clear, error-free sentences. Practice using a variety of complex structures with accuracy.

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