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Band 5+: The two maps below show a park as it is today and planned changes that will be completed in 2020.

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The image shows two diagrams comparing current and new park designs. The current park features a football pitch, duck pond, main lawn, water fountain, sheltered area, clubhouse, and a variety of trees. The new park design, slated to be completed in 2020, includes a sports field, dog park, main lawn, water fountain, sheltered area, clubhouse, restrooms, a car park, cafe and restaurant, and provides free Wi-Fi throughout.

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The following two maps describe a alternation of the park after the constractions processes in 2020.

Overall, it is noticeable that the parks environmental conditions had been improved throught planting more trees and transfarmation the area of the duck pond to the club house.

In detail, the sport field which is located in the west of the park located the in the area of last football pitch.Around the football area there was a main road which were lead to sheltered areas surrownding with numerous trees, which is now an enourmous area for a walk for dogs creating through chanding the route of the road.Morover, the east of the park had faced a great change including , the car park and rest room instead of more trees.In the building which the customers were enjoyed a holiday in club park, now have a cafe and restourants for meal. The only items which had not experienced an alternation works in 2020 are location of the main town and the water fountain.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization and accuracy. The overview is present but could be more comprehensive, highlighting the key changes more clearly. The body paragraphs contain some irrelevant or inaccurate information, such as the transformation of the duck pond into a clubhouse (which is not accurate based on the visual description). The description of the changes is not always clear, and there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on providing a clearer and more accurate description of the changes, organizing the information logically, and ensuring grammatical accuracy.

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The report's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be more effective in grouping related ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

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The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('constractions processes,' 'transfarmation'). There is limited flexibility in word choice, and errors occasionally impede understanding. Expand your vocabulary related to map descriptions and changes over time.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word forms ('throught,' 'surrownding,' 'Morover'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction.

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