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Band 6+: The two maps below show a small village in the west of Ireland in the year 2000 and at the present time.

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The image shows a comparison of land use changes in an area from the year 2000 to the present. In 2000, the area had a large section of farmland, a market, a dock, a shop, housing, and a hotel. In the present, the farmland has been replaced by a park, the market has been replaced by restaurants, the dock remains unchanged, there is an additional shop, additional housing, a car park has been added, and the hotel remains unchanged.

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Both maps illustrates the west of ireland’s low populated village from 2000 to today.

Overall, although population of the rural settlement has been dramatically increased during the years shown, some features remaind the same. New settlements have been built over the years.

In 2000, there were a copule of house and one hotel at the center of the village, and there were farmland in the northwest corner of the map. At the seaside, there were a dock with some boats and a market.

Presently, the farmland in the north-western part of the village has been converted to a park, while roads have been expanded due to accommodate more houses in the north-west area, and at the north-east corner, extra settlements have been constructed. Additionally, a car park has been built west of the hotel, and the martket in the southern area has been rebuilt into restaurants, also dock which was located in the river has been demolished. but the shops on the westremains unchanged.

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The report covers the main changes and some key features, but there are a few inaccuracies (e.g., the dock was not demolished, and there's an additional shop). The organization is generally clear, but could benefit from more precise language and a stronger focus on comparisons. To improve, ensure all details are accurate and that the report highlights the most significant changes and continuities.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The overview is present but could be more impactful by directly addressing the key changes and continuities. Transitions between paragraphs and within sentences need strengthening to enhance the logical progression of ideas. For instance, the connection between the overall increase in population and the specific changes in land use could be made more explicit. Paragraphing is generally acceptable, but refining the focus of each paragraph would improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the changes, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the description. For example, instead of 'settlements have been built,' consider using 'residential areas have expanded' or 'new housing developments have been constructed.' There are also some inaccuracies ('martket' instead of 'market,' 'westremains' instead of 'west remains') that affect the clarity of the report. Expanding the range of vocabulary related to urban development and land use would be beneficial.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact the overall clarity. Errors such as 'Both maps illustrates,' 'population of the rural settlement has been dramatically increased,' 'copule of house,' and incorrect use of articles and prepositions need to be addressed. While the range of structures is adequate, improving grammatical accuracy is crucial. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles and prepositions to enhance the grammatical accuracy of the report.

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