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Band 5+: the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

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The image shows two schematic layouts of the area surrounding "City Hospital" in the years 2007 and 2010, illustrating changes in infrastructure and transportation facilities. In 2007, the layout features City Hospital at the center, a Ring Road encompassing the hospital, a bus stop situated east, and "Car park: staff and public" on the southeast corner adjacent to City Road. For 2010, modifications include the development of a bus station connected directly below the hospital, the addition of a "Staff car park" located east of the hospital, and a Public car park further east. Additionally, a roundabout is added to the road network on the right side of the layout. Both diagrams include a compass for orientation, with north indicated at the top.

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The map illustrates the changes that have took place the road access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Overall, it can be observed that city hospitals underwent significant change, over the three-years of period. Several facilities being added.The most noticeable features are the Bus station, separate public car park and roundabout, while the Ring road, city hospital, city road, hospital road remain unchanged.

In 2007, the city hospital was rounded by a ring road,.Hospital Road connected the hospital area to City Road in the south hospital with several bus stops and a shared car park facility for staff and public was situated on the east side of the hospital road.

In 2010, the city hospital was rounded by a ring road that had remained unchanged, While some facilities had been constructed, with additional public car park on the eastern side.Meanwhile, Hospital Road connected the hospital area to City Road with two additional roundabouts.Furthermore, several bus station had been replaced by bus station and staff car park on on the western and eastern side.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes between 2007 and 2010, such as the addition of a bus station, separate car parks, and roundabouts. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the bus stop was replaced by a bus station, not 'several bus stations'; the staff car park is east of the hospital, not west; and the roundabout is singular, not two. The report also contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data description, use correct grammar, and organize information more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent punctuation errors (e.g., missing spaces after commas, incorrect use of commas) and some unclear references. The overview is present but could be more clearly presented. Cohesive devices are used, but sometimes inaccurately (e.g., 'While' used incorrectly). To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic, use a range of linking words accurately, and proofread for punctuation to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'illustrates', 'underwent', 'constructed', 'remained unchanged'), but there are several inaccuracies and repetitions. For example, 'rounded' should be 'surrounded', and 'three-years of period' is awkward. The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are used incorrectly (e.g., 'bus stops' vs 'bus station'). To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing changes (e.g., 'demolished', 'relocated', 'expanded') and use precise terms for infrastructure. Avoid repetition by using synonyms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including incorrect verb forms ('have took'), missing articles, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation errors (e.g., missing spaces, incorrect commas). There are also sentence fragments (e.g., 'Several facilities being added.'). The range of grammatical structures is limited, with most sentences being simple or compound. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and sentence boundaries. Careful proofreading is essential.

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