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Band 5+: The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releevant.

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The image contains two maps, "Before" and "After," illustrating an island's development, with a 100m scale bar. The "Before" map shows an undeveloped island featuring a beach on the western side and some palm trees. The "After" map details the addition of tourist facilities: a pier on the southern coast with sailboats; a central reception building linked by a vehicle track to the pier and a nearby restaurant; two clusters of accommodation huts, one with 6 huts to the west and another with 4 huts to the east; a network of footpaths connecting the huts and reception; and a designated swimming area in the sea off the western beach.

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The maps illustrates a island before and after the development of several tourist features.

Overall, the island shows a remarkable change as from only containing tree and a beach to having multiple tourist facilities. Currently, island consist of all the needed features to become tourism island as it include pier, accommodations, restaurant, reception, swimming facilities.

The island before the development was undeveloped because it only include some tree and a beach. Now, the island is more developed as it include a footpath and vehicle track for transportation inside the island. Secondly, the construction of pier on the south will be a fundamental feature for island as it will manage the ingoing and outgoing boat in the island. The noticeable change is that swimming facilities have been introduced at the beach at the west of island

In terms of other developments, a reception is built in the middle of island and which is just above the pier. Additionally,15 accommodations are established in the both side of island. Lastly, a restaurant is set up on the north side of island.

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island: 12

beach: 3

include: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes on the island, including the addition of tourist facilities and the overall transformation. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the number of accommodation huts is incorrectly stated as 15 (the visual shows 6 and 4, totaling 10), and the restaurant is placed on the north side, whereas it is actually near the reception and vehicle track. The report also lacks a clear comparison between the two maps, which is a key requirement. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and explicitly compare the before and after states, highlighting the development of infrastructure and facilities.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The overview is somewhat repetitive and lacks precise comparison. Paragraphing is present but could be more logically organized, with the second paragraph mixing general changes and specific details. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but limited in range and precision. There is some repetition (e.g., 'island', 'include') and informal or inaccurate word choices (e.g., 'tourism island', 'manage the ingoing and outgoing boat'). To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'construction', 'facilities', 'accommodation', 'pathway') and more sophisticated collocations (e.g., 'undergo significant development', 'be equipped with'). Avoid informal language and ensure word forms are correct (e.g., 'trees' instead of 'tree').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('maps illustrates', 'island consist'), article usage ('a island', 'the island'), and incorrect verb forms ('will manage' instead of 'manages'). Punctuation is mostly correct but some sentences are run-ons. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and using a wider range of sentence structures with greater accuracy. Proofreading for these common errors would significantly enhance the grammatical range and accuracy.

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