Band 6+: The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releevant.

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes on the island, including the addition of tourist facilities and the retention of natural features. It provides an overall summary and makes some comparisons between the before and after maps. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the task achievement. For instance, the report incorrectly states that the eastern part remains in its natural state, while the description indicates that there are accommodation huts in the east. Additionally, the report mentions a cluster of houses around the eastern trees, which is somewhat accurate, but it fails to mention the swimming area and the specific number of huts. The language is generally clear, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'clumster', 'unhabited', 'hut-styled accomodation'). To improve, ensure that all key features are accurately reported and that the report is well-organized with precise vocabulary.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'these features are retained with some buildings surrounding it' is vague, and the description of the accommodation clusters is confusing. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph has a single main idea. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'refurbishment', 'modernizations', 'unhabited'). However, there are several errors and awkward choices, such as 'clumster' (likely meant 'cluster'), 'hut-styled accomodation groups', and 'containing 2 ships' (more natural would be 'with two boats'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to maps and development, and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid informal or inaccurate terms.

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are noticeable grammar errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'the majority of the modernizations was constructed' should be 'were constructed', and 'unhabited' should be 'uninhabited'. Also, the sentence 'Right in the middle of two hut-styled accomodation groups located a reception building' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Use a wider range of grammatical structures with more accuracy.