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Letter

Band 5+: write a letter to close friend sharing your recent experience at a new job or school.

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Dear friend,

what,s craking ,buddy?it’s been way too long since we caught up,Ithought I’d drop you a line and fill you in on what’s been going down.

firstoff,I gotta say, my life has been straight fire lately! I’v been hustling hard,grinding and chasing those goals like a boss,can’t Explain you know.

Anyway! I wanted to a let you in on the dope opporunity,I’v came across. I’m starting this side hustle that gonna below-up real quick .I gonna be a lit!I can’t spill all the deets just yet,but trust me, its gonna be a game-changer.

A part from this ,I’ve been living my best life,going to some lit parties and making memories live no tomorrow.you know,we’ll plan a wild night at soon tear up the town.

I’ll share my job experience my friend .My experience is very good for my job. My coliges are very copprative my job. I suggest my friend to join my company,there are many facilitics in my company.

Alright,my pal,hit me up. I miss my crazy advantures and non-stop laughter.

Stay dope,stay lit,and keep being awosome friend that you are!

catch you soon ,

suffyan saif

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

gonna: 3

friend: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6

The letter touches upon the task but lacks detail and clarity in conveying the job/school experience. More specific information is needed to fully address the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's structure is inconsistent, and the flow of ideas is disrupted by informal language and abrupt transitions. Improving paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is informal and contains slang. While a range of words is used, more precise and sophisticated language is needed for a higher score. The use of informal language detracts from the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors and inaccuracies significantly impact the overall clarity and understanding of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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