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Band 4+: write a letter to your friend inviting her to attend the party in your letter explain why you are organising the party say why you want your friend to come to the party describe what you are planning to do

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Dear Mia,

I Have some exciting news. My family make a small party on the last week. I’m writing to invite you for coming to my family party.

Last weak, I told you I follow a famous one math competation. After long time trying hard, I got my chance becoming a winner in this competation. I felt like on cloud nine because it have been long time from last time I won the competation. I felt like lost my sparks due to still lost. So When I got this competation that I remember what you said it’s okey if you lost still praying and trying, when you got what you want you could be more greatful for it. So My parents also me make a small party to celebrate my achievement.

This party will hold in my home on last week. You have come. This party is designed like a younger tasted. Then I just invite my closed friend also My family will be there but That’s not a big family. In the Party soon I will hold some activity such creative and active activy also There will be serving some delicious food.

I hope you come to my family party because this celebrate my achievement, also I wouldn’t get my achievement if I didn’t bounce back due to your saying. So what you were saying that’s time it’s means a lot for me.

Thank you for reading this letter, don’t forget to coming to my family party

Yours Bestie,

Zee

Word Count: 251

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

family: 6

party: 6

competation: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the three bullet points, but there are notable omissions and inaccuracies. The reason for the party is explained (winning a math competition), and the importance of the friend's presence is mentioned, but the description of planned activities is vague and lacks detail. Additionally, the timing is confusing: the party is described as happening 'last week,' which contradicts the invitation. There are also several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. To improve, ensure the letter is logically consistent (e.g., use future tense for the party), provide more specific details about the activities, and proofread for grammar and spelling.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a clear overall purpose, but the flow is disrupted by frequent errors and awkward phrasing. The organization is somewhat logical (reason, plans, importance), but the transitions between ideas are abrupt, and some sentences are confusing. For example, the shift from the competition to the party details is not smooth. To improve, use clear paragraphing and linking words (e.g., 'Firstly', 'In addition', 'Most importantly') to guide the reader. Also, ensure each paragraph has a single clear focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with several word choice errors (e.g., 'competation' instead of 'competition', 'younger tasted' instead of 'younger taste', 'closed friend' instead of 'close friend'). There is some attempt at informal language suitable for a friend, but it is not always accurate. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary and use more precise and natural expressions. For example, instead of 'make a small party', use 'organize a small gathering' or 'throw a small party'. Also, proofread to correct spelling and word form errors. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense (e.g., 'I Have' should be 'I have', 'make' should be 'are making' or 'organized'), subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'it have been' should be 'it has been'), and sentence structure (e.g., 'This party will hold' should be 'This party will be held'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly, and review basic grammar rules such as tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Practice writing shorter, clearer sentences to reduce errors.

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