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Band 5+: Writing task 1. The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2013. Summarise the infonnation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a vertical bar chart comparing the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2013: London, Edinburgh, Manchester, Birmingham, and Liverpool. Four purposes are distinguished: Holiday, Business, Visiting friends or relatives, and Miscellaneous. London percentages: Holiday ~62%, Business ~22%, Visiting friends or relatives ~10%, Miscellaneous ~6%. Edinburgh percentages: Holiday ~47%, Business ~23%, Visiting friends or relatives ~15%, Miscellaneous ~15%. Manchester percentages: Holiday ~25%, Business ~27%, Visiting friends or relatives ~35%, Miscellaneous ~13%. Birmingham percentages: Holiday ~30%, Business ~30%, Visiting friends or relatives ~25%, Miscellaneous ~15%. Liverpool percentages: Holiday ~60%, Business ~10%, Visiting friends or relatives ~25%, Miscellaneous ~5%.

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The bar chart illustrates the precentage of the purpose of visits to five cities, such as London, Edinburgh, Mancbester UK cities, Birmingham and Liverpool in the UK in the year 2013.

Overall, there is a sinificant difference between Holiday and Miscellaneous. It is noticeable that in the Edinburgh have the highest percentage of visitors with the purpose of Holiday. Meanwhile, in the Birmingham have the lowest percentage of visitors with the purpose of Miscellaneous.

It is clear that in the Edinburgh account for 70% the purpose of visits to have purpose is Holiday. Converselly, in the Birmingham make up 8% the purpose of visits to have purpose of Miscellaneous.

It is obvious the second highest purpose of the visit was the holiday in London, which took up account for 50%. For Mancbester UK cities and Liverpool have precentage the purpose equivalent for visiting friends or relatives.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

purpose: 9

holiday: 4

visits: 3

cities: 3

edinburgh: 3

birmingham: 3

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Task Response

The main features of the chart are presented, but some key information is missing or inaccurate. The report would benefit from a more comprehensive summary of all the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. Grammatical errors and inconsistencies affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies are present, impacting the clarity and fluency of the report. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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Band 5+: Writing task 1. The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2013. Summarise the infonnation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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