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Band 6+: Writing Task 1: You are planning a holiday trip and would like to invite your friend to join you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the trip and why you are excited about it give details about the dates, destination, and activities, invite your friend to come and explain why it would be fun to go together.

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Dear David,

I hope you are well. The reason why I am addressing this correspondence to ask if you could join me for a holiday trip to Paris.

As I told you earlier, I have just finished that huge task of my work. The past two months were so hard and stressful for me and I really want to find a place to relax for a while. So I asked for a 7 day paid leaving next month and I am planning to have a tour to Hainan. However, I really hate traveling alone and I am wondering if you could be my companion.

You told me that you had been fancy a trip to Paris for many years and never got the chance. Well, this could be a great opportunity for us. Since you will be on your summer holiday next month, I guess the time won’t be a problem for you.

I really hope you don’t have any other plans and could go on this vacation with me. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

could: 4

really: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, there is some inconsistency in the destinations mentioned (Hainan and Paris).

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there's room for more precise and varied word choices to enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, there are several errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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