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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The image depicts a combination of a bar graph and a line graph comparing bathing suit sales (in hundred thousands of US dollars) and average temperatures (in Fahrenheit) for New York City in 2012 from January to June. Sales increase from $50,000 in January to $300,000 in June, while temperatures rise from 30°F to 70°F over the same period. May saw the largest sales jump to $250,000. Sales and temperatures show a positive correlation.

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the bar chart and line chart illustrates the average monthly temperature and bathing suit sales in first 6 months of 2012 at New York.

overall, sales for bathing suits had fluctuations throughout the first 6 months of the year starting with a grow and ending up with a downgrade trend, while the temperature rose significantly throughout the first 6 months.

the bathing suits revenue started at 100 thousand $ in January, then increased notably to 150 thousand $ in March, which after that had a significant growth in revenue which rose upto approximately 300 thousand $ in april. at the end it started to drop crucially until June.

the temperature remained at 30 Fahrenheit in January and February respectively, it started to rose rapidly from March to April with 50 Fahrenheit and kept rising until June reaching nearly 65 Fahrenheit

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The report addresses the task by describing the average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear overall structure. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information, which affect the overall coherence.

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