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Band 6+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The image depicts a combination of a bar graph and a line graph comparing bathing suit sales (in hundred thousands of US dollars) and average temperatures (in Fahrenheit) for New York City in 2012 from January to June. Sales increase from $50,000 in January to $300,000 in June, while temperatures rise from 30°F to 70°F over the same period. May saw the largest sales jump to $250,000. Sales and temperatures show a positive correlation.

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The above complex diagram illustrates average monthly climate and swimming suit sales in New York for the first six months of 2012. The two vertical axes depict the average temperatures in Fahrenheit and revenue in hundreds of thousands of US dollars, while the horizontal axis demonstrates the months from January to June.

It is immediately noticeable that the majority of people buy bathing suits in April when the temperature is around 50 °C, while it has gradually decreased in June because of the overheating and people have stopped buying clothes. By analyzing the diagram, it shows that, when the heat is steady, the clothing sale has dramatically increased from January to March.

In conclusion, we can say that people bought bathing suits when the temperature moderately increased, which means people are having fun in the summer.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and misunderstandings. The writer identifies the main features, but misinterprets the data, e.g., stating that sales decreased in June due to overheating, which is not supported by the graph. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is mostly coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The writer uses transitional phrases, but the connections between sentences are not always logical. The conclusion seems unrelated to the rest of the report.

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The writer uses some precise vocabulary, but there are also some inaccuracies and imprecise terms. The use of 'complex diagram' and 'moderately increased' is good, but 'overheating' and 'stopped buying clothes' are not accurate.

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The writer demonstrates a range of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors, e.g., 'it has gradually decreased in June because of the overheating and people have stopped buying clothes.' The verb tenses are not consistently used.

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