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Band 4+: You are a football player, but you have to leave the team for a while, write a letter to your team-mate and say: - why you have to leave, - how much you love the football team, - when you are coming back.

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Dear Kirushanth,

I hope this letter find you well, I need a leave from our football team beacause I have a family function in Australia for my cousin so I need to go there with my family and friends and I have some plan to visit some famous places in australia so I think it takes long time to comeback and join our team. I am playing the team 10 years and I love our team how much I love my family because I am very happy when I am with my team as well as all team members are very friendly with me so I am gonna miss them very much. I love our coach he is like my brother I also miss him very much.

I think I am joining back our team after 6 months because I have numerous plan in australia so tell this message all our members.

Yours sincearly,

Sharun Mano

Word Count: 156

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
family: 3
australia: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the reason for leaving, expressing love for the team, and indicating the return time. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, refining sentence structure and word choice would enhance clarity and fluency. Also, ensure consistent use of tenses and correct article usage.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, when transitioning from the reason for your leave to your feelings about the team, a phrase like 'In addition to this family commitment...' could be helpful. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of saying 'famous places,' you could mention specific landmarks or attractions. Try to incorporate synonyms and more descriptive language to make your writing more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and verb tense consistency. For example, ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct tense forms throughout the letter. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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