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Band 4+: You are currently renting an apartment, and you've noticed some necessary repairs that your landlord needs to address. Write a letter to your landlord about these repairs. In your letter, you should: - Describe the specific repairs that are needed. - Explain how these issues are affecting your living situation. - Suggest a convenient time for the repairs to be carried out.

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Dear Ma’am and Sir,

I would like you inform you about repair in my apartment unit,

I’d like to repair the restroom due to not working the toilet flash, as well as some other parts similarly faucet they continue to flow the water, moreover the switch of light cannot be accurate to turning on and off the bulb, And the roofing they will need to repair also because the typon is coming as of news on the tv.

These part of my apartment they need to urgent repair because i used it every day and it could be functional they want to used it mostlikely the restroom due to very crucial to used in every day.

I suggest a time to repair when i go to my work or in the afternoon if my neighbor is wake up early morning and i ask to my roommate a time it’s posible to do it .

Your Truly,

Joshua Pascua

Word Count: 158

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

repair: 5

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by identifying needed repairs, explaining their importance, and suggesting a time for the repairs. However, the language contains inaccuracies and awkward phrasing, which affects clarity. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary and constructing grammatically correct sentences. Also, ensure the tone is consistently polite and formal.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the requests and explanations. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. To improve coherence, focus on creating clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensuring a logical flow of information. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'therefore,' 'in addition,' 'however') to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('typon,' 'flash'). There's a lack of precision in describing the issues. To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to repairs and household issues. For example, instead of 'not working the toilet flash,' use 'the toilet flush is malfunctioning.' Consult a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often unclear, hindering understanding. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Consider using online grammar checkers or seeking feedback from a language tutor.

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