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Band 4+: You are dissatisfied with the course You chose at college and would like to shift to a different one write a letter to the directos of the college requesting to change your course you should the fellocating Indude details about the - what course you doing no are yo - why are you not satisfied with thar what course would you like to change to

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Dear sir / Matam

I am helly Patel I am inditing this letten to Appeal to change a course finance to Marketing. I am taking addmission in your clg gls university form 20 july 2023. and menroll l Number IM18264.

Currently I am doing financial course from your clg . Starting I am very interestin in this cocoung so i decided to take financial course after some time I am dissatisfied with that course due to lot of Numericals and also law concept so I Want to change didiffernt stream that is Marketing. In the Marketing there is no didifficulties to compare of first one. It is very informative course and also help to how to run own your Business, Sell to Product and another one 8s most important how to competitive with other Competitors so I finally decided to change subject . I am look forward to a Positive response from your end.

Yours sincerely

helly Patel

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marketing: 3

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Task Response

6.5

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