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Band 4+: You are hosting a weekend picnic for your family and want to invite them to join you. Write a letter to your family inviting them to the picnic. You should include details about: - the location of the picnic and why it's a great spot - the day and time the picnic will take place - what food or items they should bring along.

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Dear Parents,

I hope you all are good. I am very happy to give some exiting surprises to you. I decided will be enjoy the weekend with family

members. Let in explain.

To begin with, I will be decide to go a long trip with family members and siblings because of my uncle’s birthday next Sunday. Therefore, I would like to celebrate his birthday. Location of the picnic is Mount Abu because my uncles like sports activiti such as tracking. In addition, atmosphere is very beautiful and get fresh air.

During the summer season, is the best time to go picnic because of children vacation. After that I would decide 13 and 14 April. It is a pic time to go there.

You do not worry. I will be manage all thing and also, I book hotel room and breakfast, lunch and dinner. Moreover, you bring only your daily medicine and swimming costume.

I hope you will enjoy the trip.

Yours faithfully,

Ekta shah.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by including the necessary information. However, the structure and clarity could be improved for better impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the overall quality. Some lexical errors are present.

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Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the clarity and overall quality of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial for better communication.

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