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Band 4+: You are interested in attending a training course abroad but require financial support to do so. Write a letter to the education department requesting financial assistance. In your letter introduce yourself| describe the training course and how it would benefit your work explain why you need financial assistance.

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Dear sir,

My name is satveer sidhu and I had recently completed my course in car manufacturing industry from block A sector 32 chandigarh. I am writing this letter to get assest from education department for financial assistance.

As I had completed my study in car experiment sector and now I had to go abroad for training in this work sector. It will be beneficial for my job along with local masses of our nation. In this training I will come to know how to convert a fuel car to electric car in order to save natural resources and to reduce the amount of pollution.

I needs financial assistance as I came to know that I have to live there for one month in Uk for my training due to this, I request you to pay for my airlines ticket and living cost of one month. Which is quite impossible for me to pay. As I belong to poor section of the society.

I am looking forward to hear this from you soon.

Your sincerely,

Satveer sidhu

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
sector: 3
training: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5
The letter addresses the main points of the task by introducing the writer, describing the training course, and explaining the need for financial assistance. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details and expanding on how the training will benefit the writer's work.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. Try to organize the content more effectively into paragraphs to enhance the overall structure and flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

4
There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using more precise language to convey your message effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, such as tense inconsistencies, missing articles, and punctuation mistakes. Review your grammar and punctuation to improve the overall accuracy of your writing.

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