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Band 4+: You are organizing a charity fundraising event for a local cause and need to reach out to potential volunteers. Write a letter to a local business or community member asking for their support and assistance with the event. You should include details about: - the purpose and goals of the fundraising event - the different volunteer roles available and how they can contribute - the date, time, and location of the event

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing thus letter to you to inform about our Chart dy even for raise money for Horal cause. And we need to coordinate with volunteers.

we are planing to held the event on September 15 th in Hae morning 9.00 am at cings pork that are be cause not only aids of its a major event of the gear we are looking for volunteers who can support event.

Volunteer act a major part event and Hura for volunteers for instant for curde in Counters guide and so on.

If you like to join our event and support the success the event you can log into our website and browse more details about it or you can call directly to our landline number. I hope you will join this event support us. Our website telephone 778-5678. Thank you coordinator.

Word Count: 142

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

event: 6

support: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task, but it lacks detail and clarity in some areas. The information about the date, time, and location is present, but could be clearer. The roles available for volunteers are mentioned vaguely. The sign-up process is described, but could be more specific. To improve, provide more specific details about the event, the volunteer roles, and the sign-up process. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the intended message. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. The introduction is abrupt, and the transitions between ideas are not smooth. To improve coherence, focus on creating a clear structure with a logical flow of information. Use transitional phrases to connect ideas and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey the message effectively. There are instances of incorrect word usage ('Chart dy even' instead of 'charity event', 'Horal cause' instead of 'local cause', 'cings pork' instead of 'Kings Park'). To improve, expand your vocabulary and focus on using words accurately. Use a dictionary or thesaurus to find more appropriate and precise words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('we are planing to held'), incorrect article usage ('the event on September 15 th in Hae morning'), and sentence structure issues ('Volunteer act a major part event'). To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, including verb tenses, articles, and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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