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Band 4+: You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:

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Dear Sir ,

This letter is about MBA 1st year. band program.

There is a abrupt in the program . There is no community hall for the pratise. And we are the part of the music team.

this pratice is conducted on tusday and friday.

We are the good gang for music. our team is used to get lots of price for conducting musical festival in other collage.And individual price is got for each candiate for the playing the music in the intercollage sports.

However we are praticing the music for alternative days they are coming Monday and Tusday. ithe rehusal will be starting from afternoon . we are providing food and clothes for young ones. For this event we het fund from the odiance. We are charging 1000 rs for each visiter. this makes them more happy . mainly this program is conducted for helping poor people

Thanking you

yours faithfully

Harikrishnan

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The letter does not clearly state the purpose of writing and lacks a clear request. It also includes irrelevant information about the band's activities and fundraising efforts.

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The letter is difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and lack of clear organization. The information is presented in a disjointed manner.

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The letter uses a limited range of vocabulary and some words are used incorrectly.

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The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and punctuation. These errors significantly affect the clarity and coherence of the message.

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