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Band 5+: You are planning a picnic for your family and want to invite your relatives to join. Write a letter to your relatives inviting them to the picnic. You should include details about: - the purpose of the picnic and why you want to have it - the date and location of the picnic - what food or activities they should bring or expect during the picnic.

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Dear my little sister

You always known i have been passionate to the nature since childhood. So i decided to organize modest picnic with our family just for the weekends! because we are so busy nowadays and I adore spending time with my family, especially with you, therefore i want us wont be seperate this time.

You wont believe where the location is, The Khandadhar Falls! Tucked away in Keonjhar, Khandadhar Falls is a breathtaking waterfall surrounded by dense of decidious forests. Can you imagine? it means we can haunt any animals we want, in addition, to explore the insects world, there is plenty of them, we can even do the Biology project for our dear teacher. Moreover, with a 500 feet cascade created by Koprani Nala therefore the best spot for chilling with family or friends

Oh yeah, about activities, we could haunt animals and learn about little insects like i mentioned earlier, do Skinny Dipping together and splashing water to each other and live our best life, not even bothering about school or problems, and enjoy every second of it just kick it out of your pretty mind. Also we can dip our toes to the plumge pool. Oh Right i want to bring Guessing Flags game too, i hope you remember what it is, unless i can remind you anyways.

Oh yeah, when youre about to bring something, DO NOT! Its all on me so dont even worry about that, our picninc will be on Wednesday at 1 pm, there will be so good weather, warm and windy, just how we love it.

best Wishes

Zinnura

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

family: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses the task by including the location, date, time, and suggested activities. However, some aspects could be more clearly communicated.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's structure is somewhat disorganized, affecting the flow of information. Improving paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural-sounding.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies are present, impacting the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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