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Band 4+: You are planning a potluck dinner party to celebrate the end of summer with your neighbors. Write a letter inviting your neighbors to the party. You should include: - The reason for hosting the potluck dinner - Specifics about the date, time, and location. - Instructions on what kind of dish each neighbor should bring.

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Hi! I’m your new neighbor move on here recently…

I want to do potluck dinner party and invite you to divide this great time with me I think it’s help to get acquainted you can tell more me about our neighborhood ,share some interesting stuff about ourselves and I think it helps us to know each other better and we can spend great time together!

My party will happen at Friday 10 August 20:00 pm at my address ”Dom Pushkin 132”

I’m actually moved to England very recently so if you want and can you can bring some national dish to share and we can enjoy it together and you can teach me more about some small piece nationally.

With love. Katrin!

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including the purpose of the party, details of the event, and the type of dish to bring. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and idiomatic English expressions. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, lacking clear paragraphing and a logical flow of ideas. The purpose of the party is mentioned, but the details are somewhat jumbled. To improve, structure your letter with a clear introduction stating the purpose, a body paragraph detailing the event, and a concluding paragraph. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'therefore,' 'in addition,' 'however') to link ideas and sentences smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks variety. There are instances of informal language ('stuff') and imprecise word choices. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary related to invitations, social events, and food. For example, instead of 'great time,' consider 'enjoyable evening' or 'pleasant gathering.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('move on here recently'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., compound and complex sentences) and carefully proofread your work for grammatical errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, articles, and prepositions.

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