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Band 5+: You are planning a weekend get-together with friends to enjoy some outdoor activities and want to invite a friend who has been busy lately. Write a letter to this friend inviting them to the get-together. You should include details about: - the purpose of the get-together (e.g., hiking, barbecue) - the date, time, and location of the event - any items or equipment they should bring.

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Hi john,

I hope you are doing splendid. I am writing this letter to invite you for a get-together next week.

It’s been 1 year since our graduation. We didn’t got time to meet up so, i thought i should plan a event with our old friends. I think you also miss our college days and by coming we can remember those moments.

After considering our jobs and holidays, I thought the coming long weekend in next will be a perfect date. we will go on 2 days tour in mornihills for hikiong. As for the lodging thhe restaurant decent is booked for all of us.

Some of my friend have already visited this place and recommended to bring flashlight and some navigations tools as it is a remote hilly area.

I couldn’t wait to meet you. If you have queries just let me know.

Your wellwisher,

Ravi Bhardwaj.

Word Count: 149

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting a friend to a get-together and includes some details about the purpose (hiking), timing (long weekend), and items to bring (flashlight, navigation tools). However, there are several omissions and inaccuracies: the specific date, time, and location are not clearly stated; the purpose is mentioned but not elaborated (e.g., hiking is noted but no mention of barbecue or other activities); and the items to bring are vague. Additionally, there are minor grammatical errors and informal phrasing that affect clarity. To improve, provide precise details for date, time, and location, clearly state the main activities, and list specific items needed. Proofread for grammar and spelling errors. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical structure, but the flow is disrupted by several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The purpose is clear, but the details about the event (date, time, location) are vague and could be better organized. Paragraphing is attempted but not always effective. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on one main idea. Also, check for missing punctuation and capitalization (e.g., 'i' should be 'I', 'thhe' should be 'the').

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are some errors and informal choices (e.g., 'splendid' is slightly formal, 'mornihills' is misspelled, 'hikiong' should be 'hiking'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some phrases are not natural (e.g., 'the restaurant decent is booked'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and proofread for spelling mistakes. Consider using words like 'reminisce' instead of 'remember those moments'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as 'We didn't got time' (should be 'We haven't had time' or 'We didn't get time'), 'i thought i should plan a event' (should be 'I thought I should plan an event'), and 'the coming long weekend in next will be' (unclear). Punctuation is inconsistent, and sentence structures are often simple or incorrect. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences) and review basic grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement and article usage.

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