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Band 4+: You are planning a weekend hiking trip with a group of friends but need to finalize the details. Write a letter to your friends outlining the plan. You should include details about: - the proposed dates and location for the hike - the level of difficulty and any necessary equipment - how you will handle transportation and meals.

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hello, as it’s known, I am planning a weekend trip with our group, also it’s known that i’am coordinating the travel and accommodation arrangements. As an event operator, I propose to buy tickets soon so we can go this Sunday afternoon, since our trip will be from Sunday to Wednesday.

To make our trip more memorable, we have some options where we can stay, one of the highest, yet expnesive choice, we have is five-star hotel with a beach view, or we can stay less luxery place but be close to bars and clubs.

During our trip, I would love if us will go to cinemas, maybe play some sports such as tennis and go to disco dances

best wishes, your friend

Word Count: 122

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by outlining travel dates, accommodation options, and activities. However, it could benefit from more specific details and a clearer structure. For example, providing exact dates and times for travel, elaborating on the accommodation options with names or specific features, and suggesting more concrete activities would enhance the response. Also, the tone could be more friendly and engaging to better suit the context of writing to a friend. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas are abrupt. To improve coherence, use more explicit transition words and phrases to connect your ideas. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to that' or 'Furthermore' to link related points. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve the flow of your letter.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey your ideas effectively. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to travel and accommodation. For example, instead of 'nice place,' you could use 'charming boutique hotel' or 'well-appointed apartment.' Also, be careful with spelling, as 'expensive' and 'luxury' were misspelled.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper sentence structure. For example, 'I am planning' should be used consistently, and sentences like 'I would love if us will go' need restructuring to 'I would love for us to go.' Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors.

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