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Band 5+: You are planning a weekend hiking trip with a group of friends but need to finalize the details. Write a letter to your friends outlining the plan. You should include details about: - the proposed dates and location for the hike - the level of difficulty and any necessary equipment - how you will handle transportation and meals.

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Dear alley,

Hi alley, how are you doing! I hope you are doing great. I write this letter in order to discuss our camping agenda on the weekend. Where do you thing we should go this time? Since we are having a mid-term exam next week, i dont think we can go far for this weekend camping agenda. I was thinking about the forest near your house, don’t you think it will be a great place to camp in? Since last time we already managed to spend the night on mount salak, i think we will do just fine just in a forest.

moreover, we dont really have to bring much stuff, probably just the tent and sleeping bag. If theres anything we need, we can just take it from your house anytime. You can also bring your projector for movie night? How’s that sound?! Oh my god im so thrilled 🤩 And we could also bring some popcorn! Playing truth or dare afterwards and closing it by telling a horror story… uh, spooky! I love how thats sounds!

Anyway, looking forward for your opinion! Feel free if you want to add or change the agenda or our destinations! Whatever it is i will still looking forward to it! It will be the best camping before we ended up in front bunch of paper material, studying for the exam.

Your lovely friend,

Marinda

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
camping: 3
agenda: 3
think: 3
bring: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including suggesting a location, discussing equipment, and proposing activities. However, there are some areas where more specific details could enhance the response. For example, while the letter mentions bringing a tent and sleeping bag, it doesn't specify who will bring each item. Similarly, while activities are mentioned, elaborating on specific hiking trails or campfire games could add depth. The tone is appropriately friendly and enthusiastic. To improve, focus on providing more concrete details and ensuring a clear division of responsibilities for the trip.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring the letter with clearer topic sentences for each paragraph to guide the reader. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, use phrases like 'In addition to that' or 'Furthermore' to connect related ideas.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of saying 'bring much stuff,' you could list specific items like 'cooking utensils, portable stove, and first-aid kit.' Also, avoid using overly informal language like 'How's that sound?!' in a formal letter. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct verb tense usage. For example, 'Where do you thing we should go this time?' should be 'Where do you think we should go this time?' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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