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Band 7+: You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding my three-month internship in your organisation in the not-too-distant future.

I want to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to get work experience at NoName Hotel. With my attention to detail, proactive behaviour and responsible attitude to work I can bring new ideas to make your business processes better. At the same time I would like to learn more about customer service, booking applications, selling methods and project management. I am sure these soft and hard skills will help me to defend my diploma and contribute to the development of NoName Hotel.

Could you possibly write to me more about my professional duties? When does my work experience start and what is the exact address? What documents should I bring on the first working day at NoName Hotel?

I look forward to receiving your writing response.

Yours faithfully,

Johh Doe

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by thanking the manager for the opportunity, explaining what the writer hopes to learn, and asking relevant questions about the work experience. However, the writer could have provided more specific details about the skills and knowledge they hope to gain during the work experience.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized and linked. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence and cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between expressing gratitude and asking questions. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better structure.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The writer demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary and uses it accurately and appropriately. There is a good control of lexical features, and the language used is natural and sophisticated. However, some minor improvements in word choice and phrasing could enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of grammatical structures is used with flexibility and control. Punctuation and grammar are generally used appropriately throughout the letter. However, there are a few minor errors in punctuation and sentence structure that could be addressed for improved accuracy.

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