Letter

Band 5+: You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to thank you for giving me the opportunity to work in your company and I am also thrilled to work with you in the near future.

I did some research before coming to your organization that the company is manufacturing , assembling and making cars. I am so delightful that i got the chance to experience it as cars has been my passion since childhood and I am willing to learn about the entire process of making a car from the raw material to finished product.

Will I be working in an assembly plant or in an office during three months ?And if there are any vacancies in near future, please do consider me as your first reference or please let me know about it.

Thank you for your consideration and your precious time.

Yours faithfully,

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Word Count: 144

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the tasks by thanking the manager for the opportunity, explaining the hope to learn about the car manufacturing process, and asking questions about the work experience. However, the explanation of what the writer hopes to learn could be more detailed and specific to the work experience. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence, such as the abrupt transition between expressing excitement about the opportunity and asking about the work location and future vacancies. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better organization.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited, and there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and pay attention to word choice and collocations. Additionally, the tone could be more formal and professional for a letter to a manager.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter. To enhance grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures and pay attention to punctuation and verb tense consistency.

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