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Band 4+: You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Good morning, I would like to say thank you for the opportunity to do work experience in your organization. I am very grateful that you allow me to be part of your organization. You give me a great experience while I work here as a guide. For instance, I can meet other people, talk to them, and explain where is the best place in some tourist attraction. I also can come to the hidden gems in this country and entering that with free access. Moreover, I able to try the best traditional food in place that has unique culture.

Furthermore, I hope to learn any different culture in our country. I am so interested with local people in the village. I need to get more experience about art and culture in our country. On the other side, I hope that I can make people comfortable with my trip. I should be more attractive and well known about some interesting place. Indeed, I have one question of this work. First, what should I do when the tourist not interested with my trip?

That is all about my letter. You can answer my letter with your convenience. Thank you.

Sincerely,

Paramita praba

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

experience: 3

people: 3

place: 3

country: 3

about: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task. It expresses gratitude, outlines expectations, and includes relevant questions.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and logical flow. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely accurate or appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, affecting the overall clarity and fluency.

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