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Band 6+: You friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say - you agree to this arrangement -say what time is suitable for you -Describe what you are planning to do

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Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best in spirit. I am writing this letter in response to your request for accommodating your children at my home due to appointment in hospital regarding severe health issue.

On weekends, you can drop off your kids at my home without any further consideration and it’ll be a great pleasure for me as you have done a lot for me. So, it’s my turn to assist you in your hard time. I’ll definitely handle your toddlers because they are amiable and extrovert and it is going to be a great fun not only for me, but also for them.

Due to work during weekdays, I’ll be completely unoccupied at my home on weekends and so you can leave your children at any time as per your convenience. Moreover, I’m quite excited to meet you after a long time owing to hectic schedule.

Upon visit of your kids,I’m planning to prepare some traditional snacks be it fritters or funnel cake. Furthermore, I’ve decided to watch an animated movie which is although non-fiction, your children would enjoy viewing. Having watched movie, board games will be played with a view to getting rid of boredom.

I hope to see you soon.

Yours lovingly,

ABC

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

children: 3

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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, demonstrating a clear understanding of the prompt. The response is well-organized, coherent, and uses appropriate language and tone. There are no significant omissions or lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and the response addresses all parts of the task. Transitions between ideas are mostly smooth, but some sentences could be linked more effectively to improve the overall flow. For example, elaborating slightly more on the activities planned could enhance the coherence.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using words like 'radiant,' 'accommodating,' 'amiable,' and 'extrovert.' However, some phrases are slightly unnatural or could be more precise. For instance, 'best in spirit' could be replaced with a more common expression like 'good spirits.' Overall, the vocabulary is adequate but could benefit from more natural and sophisticated choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While there's an attempt to use a variety of grammatical forms, there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. For example, the sentence 'Due to appointment in hospital regarding severe health issue' is not grammatically correct and should be rephrased. Similarly, 'Having watched movie, board games will be played' could be improved for better flow and grammatical accuracy. Correcting these errors would enhance the overall impact of the letter.

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