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Band 5+: You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Sony,

I am writing to inform you that I have just been accepted as a full-time employee in the one of marketing companies and I think I cannot continue your course.

I feel unhappy because my family finances nowadays are gross so I decided to help my parent to increase our income by searching for any job occupancies. Two days ago I was called by a marketing company to do an interview and today I feel grateful to work as a staff in that company.

The main reason I cannot continue your evening course is due to the fact I lack money to pay for your course. Another reason because my work shift is start from 02:00 PM until 10:00PM which is will be conflict with your night class that start from 07:00 PM as far as 10:00PM.

This moment I would like to focus on my career for helping my familiy and if my finance already come back to normal I think I would like to continue your class.

I hope that you understand my situation. I looking forward to your reply.

Your Sincerely,

Gord

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

continue: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately describes the situation and explains why the course cannot be continued at this time. However, there are some lapses in content, such as unclear explanations for the financial situation and the decision to help the family. Additionally, the request for a future action could be more specific.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are issues with cohesion. The letter lacks clear paragraphing and the progression of ideas is not always smooth. Some sentences are unclear and may confuse the reader.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but it is not always accurate or appropriate. The language used is often informal and lacks sophistication. There are also some errors in word choice and expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation is also inconsistent. More attention to sentence structure and grammar is needed for improved accuracy.

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