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Band 6+: You have an evening class and your teacher gave you an essay to work on for the weekend. However, you were not able to finish the essay. Write a letter saying the following: - outline the subject of your essay - what happened why you did not finish it - tell what you will do to finish it.

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I am David, your student from the evening batch of ESL (English as a second language). Last weekend, you gave the essay on ‘Education should be free’. I am writing this letter to express my inability to complete the essay in time.

The topic of ‘Education should be free’ is not as such difficult but I was not able find enough matter to write.I could not go to the library as the weather was very bad during the weekend. I wanted to search on the internet but our local area network was also down due to short circuit. However, I managed to get some reference book, but I strongly feel that was not enough for the content. So, I could not finish the essay.

So I request you to spare two more days for me so that I can have a better look into the library to write a really nice essay. I am very keen on learning how to write good essays. I shall try me level best to submit my essay by Friday.

Hoping for a kind consideration from you regarding this matter.

Yours faithfully,

David

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

essay: 4

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Task Response

7.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by outlining the subject of the essay, explaining why it was not finished, and stating the plan to complete it. To improve, consider providing more specific details about the content of the essay.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, some transitions could be smoother to enhance overall coherence. Consider using linking words more effectively.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used appropriately. To enhance lexical resource, try incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to the topic of education and essay writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used accurately. Some minor errors in punctuation and sentence structure are present. Proofreading can help eliminate these errors.

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